|Reviews for The Keeper|
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/27
I actually had to go back and re-read it because at first I thought it was Luffy looking for Shanks until it was said Zoro was the one with the hat. Mind games, I tell you.
The angst is real. I really hope you didn't intend for Luffy to be dead ;_; I love that idiot too much.
I loved the story, the way you captured that much emotion into a small one-shot like this.. Looking forward to reading some of your other works! :)
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/14
Ah, you tricked me! I thought Shanks was the dead one and Luffy was looking for him, not Zoro looking for his potentially dead best friend and captain! Jeez this was a good one :)
| Wordlet chapter 1 . 9/11
I'm with Zoro on this, no body, no proof. Luffy's out there somewhere, probably either held captive by someone, gravely injured for an extremely long time, or an amnesiac. The only proof I'd accept though if I were Zoro is if someone showed up with the power of the gumu gumu nomi. Cause if he's honestly dead then he must be really gone by this point...
For some strange reason I thought for sure it was about Shanks. I thought Luffy put off his quest to find Shanks cause he can't do it and then not give his hat back, that would be breaking the promise.
Also, I'm gonna assume Ace doesn't die here. (and that Luffy doesn't either because Luffy 4ever)
| poodlecake85 chapter 1 . 4/23
NOOOOOOOO. my feels.
| redluffs chapter 1 . 4/20
I thought at first it was Luffy looking for Shanks...but DAMN PLOT TWISTS! It was Zoro lookin for his Captain afterall. That was fuckin sad you know!
| enasencca chapter 1 . 3/4
't find ways to express it.(Blows my nose)
| mysticstargirl chapter 1 . 2/8
[strangled noises of pain]
| Atsuki-rin chapter 1 . 8/25/2014
All I was looking for was a lil zolu fanfic to pick me up, I didn't want to cry! ;aaaaaa;
( that's what happens when i don't check the story's genres oh)
Anywho, very very good fic, you have succeeded to make me drown in sad, shippy feels TTTT (any chance you can add a second chapter/alternate ending where they actually find him? /shot)
| SHADOWoftheFOX chapter 1 . 7/25/2014
This is so sad. It beautifully expresses the emotional turmoil of MIA...
| MarvelousWonders chapter 1 . 5/26/2014
Never giving up hope...
| Atsuki-chan chapter 1 . 3/12/2014
I love how it appeared to be Luffy looking for Shanks, but ended with Zoro looking for Luffy. Now I'm seriously crying ;;;;; great writing x
| Fi Suki Saki chapter 1 . 12/13/2013
Whose POV is this...?!
Zoro? Or Luffy?!
| Serenity de la Luna chapter 1 . 8/22/2013
...did Luffy disappear?
He was killed by Marines and his body went into the ocean?!
THOSE BLOODY JACKASSES !
| Alyss Penedo chapter 1 . 5/18/2013
Wow. I thought it was Luffy searching for Shanks at first, even though a lot of it didn't make sense; that ending came like a sudden punch to the gut, and I had to go back and reread...
So, marvelously well done!
| Zinfer chapter 1 . 4/17/2013
My souuuulllll! It's been ripped out and tied up in an emotional knot T_T I'm so saaaddd! this was beautifully written, though it broke my heart. gosh. darn you. write something happy so I will be happy. *checks your fics out*