|Reviews for The Keeper|
| Harlequin Law chapter 1 . 7/14
Great story! You should add something about his devil fruit. If it's been six years, it would have showed up somewhere if he was dead.
| xry chapter 1 . 5/21
Sigh! Really touching and impressive! * siiiiiiiigh!*
| Everlight18 chapter 1 . 12/26/2015
Beautiful! Just beautiful. It's so heart wrenching to read and bittersweet to think that Zoro wouldn't give up even after all this time, not changing the flag and helping his crewmates fulfill their dreams while they search. At fist it seemed like it was Luffy looking for Shanks, but I love the twist of it being Zoro looking for Luffy. This makes me cry every time with Zoro's longing for the days "before" and the realization that his captain is more than likely gone, but refusing to except it. That last line is just heart breaking.
Thank you for posting this wonderful story!
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/27/2015
I actually had to go back and re-read it because at first I thought it was Luffy looking for Shanks until it was said Zoro was the one with the hat. Mind games, I tell you.
The angst is real. I really hope you didn't intend for Luffy to be dead ;_; I love that idiot too much.
I loved the story, the way you captured that much emotion into a small one-shot like this.. Looking forward to reading some of your other works! :)
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/14/2015
Ah, you tricked me! I thought Shanks was the dead one and Luffy was looking for him, not Zoro looking for his potentially dead best friend and captain! Jeez this was a good one :)
| Wordlet chapter 1 . 9/11/2015
I'm with Zoro on this, no body, no proof. Luffy's out there somewhere, probably either held captive by someone, gravely injured for an extremely long time, or an amnesiac. The only proof I'd accept though if I were Zoro is if someone showed up with the power of the gumu gumu nomi. Cause if he's honestly dead then he must be really gone by this point...
For some strange reason I thought for sure it was about Shanks. I thought Luffy put off his quest to find Shanks cause he can't do it and then not give his hat back, that would be breaking the promise.
Also, I'm gonna assume Ace doesn't die here. (and that Luffy doesn't either because Luffy 4ever)
| poodlecake85 chapter 1 . 4/23/2015
NOOOOOOOO. my feels.
| redluffs chapter 1 . 4/20/2015
I thought at first it was Luffy looking for Shanks...but DAMN PLOT TWISTS! It was Zoro lookin for his Captain afterall. That was fuckin sad you know!
| enasencca chapter 1 . 3/4/2015
't find ways to express it.(Blows my nose)
| mysticstargirl chapter 1 . 2/8/2015
[strangled noises of pain]
| Atsuki-rin chapter 1 . 8/25/2014
All I was looking for was a lil zolu fanfic to pick me up, I didn't want to cry! ;aaaaaa;
( that's what happens when i don't check the story's genres oh)
Anywho, very very good fic, you have succeeded to make me drown in sad, shippy feels TTTT (any chance you can add a second chapter/alternate ending where they actually find him? /shot)
| SHADOWoftheFOX chapter 1 . 7/25/2014
This is so sad. It beautifully expresses the emotional turmoil of MIA...
| MarvelousWonders chapter 1 . 5/26/2014
Never giving up hope...
| Atsuki-chan chapter 1 . 3/12/2014
I love how it appeared to be Luffy looking for Shanks, but ended with Zoro looking for Luffy. Now I'm seriously crying ;;;;; great writing x
| Fi Suki Saki chapter 1 . 12/13/2013
Whose POV is this...?!
Zoro? Or Luffy?!