Reviews for The Keeper
poodlecake85 chapter 1 . 4/23
NOOOOOOOO. my feels.
redlipstick77 chapter 1 . 4/20
I thought at first it was Luffy looking for Shanks...but DAMN PLOT TWISTS! It was Zoro lookin for his Captain afterall. That was fuckin sad you know!
enasencca chapter 1 . 3/4
't find ways to express it.(Blows my nose)
mysticstargirl chapter 1 . 2/8
[strangled noises of pain]
Atsuki-rin chapter 1 . 8/25/2014
All I was looking for was a lil zolu fanfic to pick me up, I didn't want to cry! ;aaaaaa;

( that's what happens when i don't check the story's genres oh)

Anywho, very very good fic, you have succeeded to make me drown in sad, shippy feels TTTT (any chance you can add a second chapter/alternate ending where they actually find him? /shot)
SHADOWoftheFOX chapter 1 . 7/25/2014
This is so sad. It beautifully expresses the emotional turmoil of MIA...
MarvelousWonders chapter 1 . 5/26/2014
Never giving up hope...
Atsuki-chan chapter 1 . 3/12/2014
I love how it appeared to be Luffy looking for Shanks, but ended with Zoro looking for Luffy. Now I'm seriously crying ;;;;; great writing x
Fi Suki Saki chapter 1 . 12/13/2013


Whose POV is this...?!

Zoro? Or Luffy?!
Serenity de la Luna chapter 1 . 8/22/2013
...did Luffy disappear?
He was killed by Marines and his body went into the ocean?!

Alyss Penedo chapter 1 . 5/18/2013
Wow. I thought it was Luffy searching for Shanks at first, even though a lot of it didn't make sense; that ending came like a sudden punch to the gut, and I had to go back and reread...
So, marvelously well done!
Zinfer chapter 1 . 4/17/2013
My souuuulllll! It's been ripped out and tied up in an emotional knot T_T I'm so saaaddd! this was beautifully written, though it broke my heart. gosh. darn you. write something happy so I will be happy. *checks your fics out*
Addiction chapter 1 . 4/7/2013
Beautiful. I like how you made it seem like it was Luffy talking about Shanks to begin with. Or maybe that was just me...
Mugiwara Otome chapter 1 . 3/24/2013
i actually thought it was luffy searchig for shanks... then i was zoro searching for luffy... *sob sob* sorry i cant favourite this cause its too sad for me, but its really well written. Any chance of a sequel where they find luffy? Maybe luffy had memory loss or something. Or maybe he was held in lvl 6 impel down... Or maybe he was brainwashed by marines and used as a human weapon... Sorry for babbling... but i cant leave luffy dead... :) :(
Rhirhirhi chapter 1 . 3/13/2013
Interesting story
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