|Reviews for The Keeper|
| Atsuki-chan chapter 1 . 3/12
I love how it appeared to be Luffy looking for Shanks, but ended with Zoro looking for Luffy. Now I'm seriously crying ;;;;; great writing x
| Fi Suki Saki chapter 1 . 12/13/2013
Whose POV is this...?!
Zoro? Or Luffy?!
| Lover's Red Rose chapter 1 . 8/22/2013
...did Luffy disappear?
He was killed by Marines and his body went into the ocean?!
THOSE BLOODY JACKASSES !
| Alyss Penedo chapter 1 . 5/18/2013
Wow. I thought it was Luffy searching for Shanks at first, even though a lot of it didn't make sense; that ending came like a sudden punch to the gut, and I had to go back and reread...
So, marvelously well done!
| Zinfer chapter 1 . 4/17/2013
My souuuulllll! It's been ripped out and tied up in an emotional knot T_T I'm so saaaddd! this was beautifully written, though it broke my heart. gosh. darn you. write something happy so I will be happy. *checks your fics out*
| Addiction chapter 1 . 4/7/2013
Beautiful. I like how you made it seem like it was Luffy talking about Shanks to begin with. Or maybe that was just me...
| Mugiwara Otome chapter 1 . 3/24/2013
i actually thought it was luffy searchig for shanks... then i realized...it was zoro searching for luffy... *sob sob* sorry i cant favourite this cause its too sad for me, but its really well written. Any chance of a sequel where they find luffy? Maybe luffy had memory loss or something. Or maybe he was held in lvl 6 impel down... Or maybe he was brainwashed by marines and used as a human weapon... Sorry for babbling... but i cant leave luffy dead... :) :(
| Rhirhirhi chapter 1 . 3/13/2013
| chaz chapter 1 . 2/8/2013
wow that was heart wrenching
| SqueeFreak chapter 1 . 1/28/2013
Oh! Poor Zoro! He'll never give in until he has concrete proof. He could search forever and never give up. T_T It would be wonderful if they found Luffy alive, but...No big disturbances? No huge happenings? It's so Non-Luffy that...I really don't have too much hope. T_T I love the way you wrote this! It truly is wonderful, even if it is a bit sad.
| Viviane Renard chapter 1 . 1/20/2013
A simply but touching one-shot. I enjoyed reading this, and seeing the thin line Zoro treads between hope and denial about his missing captain.
| Mistress of the Words chapter 1 . 12/23/2012
OMG! I wanna cry! I thought it was Luffy thinking about Shanks in the beginning but I realized it's Zoro thinking about Luffy... TT_TT you kill me!
| HiiroKumo chapter 1 . 11/17/2012
*keyboard gets wet* Your story captures Zoro so well. The way you wrote it, it shows the beautiful relationship between Zoro and Luffy. *wipes eyes and nose* Took me a while to understand. Although I can imagine it actually happening, I just hope Oda-sensei doesn't suddenly decide to take a leaf out of your book, because that would be extremely tragic. No offense. Thank you, for the masterpiece.
| mopmop chapter 1 . 9/7/2012
At first I thought they were searching for Shanks. But then, slowly...slowly...REVELATION, and I bit through the fork I was eating with, trying to stifle my sobs.
| Kimi chapter 1 . 8/26/2012
oh my god that was amazing i actually cried D;