|Reviews for Savior|
| gypsydancer529 chapter 14 . 2/24
Great story. Loved the friendship.
| Shinjiku chapter 14 . 1/2
Great fic. I absolutely love your style of writing and your choice of words. It is highly usual to come across such a diverse vocabulary in fanfics, so that was definitely one of the highlights of your fic for me. It made Xanatos' character seem all the more believable and the dialogue more "scintillating", as you would say. The relationship between Xanatos and Obi-Wan was also a joy to read about. So thanks for writing this. I had a really great time reading it.
| HeidiHo chapter 14 . 8/2/2013
To be honest, I never thought I'd be interested in the Obi-Wan/Xanatos pairing, but I must give you credit for hooking me in the beginning and keeping me engaged until the very end. Is there more in the works? Please keep writing!
| Book girl fan chapter 4 . 6/23/2013
The words you use are a little overwhelming. For example:
"My failure lies in my disregard to my meritorious apprentice who deserved far better than what I inadequately bestowed. Forgive me, Obi-Wan, for abrogating what should have been your shining moment in the sun and casting a dark shadow over the friendship I fondly valued between us."
Does anyone really talk like that? I have to say, I cannot possibly imagine Qui-Gon Jinn saying that. It's too out of character for him. Personally, I have never heard anyone say either 'meritorious' or 'abrogating'.
| Barranca chapter 14 . 5/1/2013
Thanks for the story! Even if sometimes the big words made me pay attention less to what was happening and more to how it was presented :P
| Book girl fan chapter 14 . 4/24/2013
That prize is absolutely priceless, ad something that I think Xanatos would give a lot for!
| Beloved Daughter chapter 14 . 1/6/2013
Love, love, love how you ended this story! And it was absolutely brilliant what Yoda gave Xanatos in return for helping the Jedi Order out. I never saw it coming! :)
Thanks for writing and posting!
| Margot chapter 14 . 10/18/2012
Started reading late at night and could not stop until I finished the whole story. Awesome. I always find it way cool when I find something this good. Thanks for sharing.
| Katerinaki chapter 10 . 10/14/2012
I like this story. It is certainly interesting. I just have one problem...
Your vocabulary is very impressive, but sometimes it gets tedious. Especially when a character is speaking. People don't talk that way, even in Star Wars. In a few places, it actually began distracting from the story and the action, becoming almost comical. I have problems with too many modifiers too. It's not that their bad, it's just that readers get worn out trying to understand it all.
Otherwise I am enjoying your story and I'm going to keep reading it now.
| RankinP chapter 14 . 10/10/2012
Nice descriptive first scene that put a smile on my face. I'd rate this story very satisfying from beginning to end. My compliments for your good style. I hope to read more of your work.
| Jedi Ani Unduli chapter 14 . 10/10/2012
Great ending! It is open and involves the dessert pie. What could be better, besides them eating pumpkin pie. YUM!
Good job on the last chapter. Sequel, anytime soon?
| Geri K chapter 14 . 10/9/2012
A bit of happiness interupted by evil intentions isn't it always the way. You can never have a great time without someone spoiling it.
| TamsynDell chapter 14 . 10/9/2012
A very satisfying ending to a very good story! I loved the part with Qui-Gon and the food fight - too funny!
The end was interesting, leaving room for a sequel either pairing Obi-Wan and Xan on a covert mission, or perhaps another encounter with Palpatine.
| Incognito12 chapter 14 . 10/9/2012
Good ending for a good story. The idea of Xan's reward is brilliant indeed. Now really, you have to write a sequel either to that one or to Point Me Toward Tomorrow.
| Xan Fan chapter 14 . 10/9/2012
Beautiful finish to a great story. Xan's choice of a reward was golden. Thank you so much for writing this gem.