Reviews for Breathing
jalna chapter 1 . 1/18/2010
he will always be more strong than her, more than she can dream. she only see him as the adonis guy who can make her do what he want when he want even if she despise him. she can try to hurt him with word because she is hurt to be just a body he want. the fact tristan was always more than people think of him. he came from a wealthy family since generation. he is very clever even if he don't choose to show it after all in the show he is in the top five and don't even work for it. he is a leader and know it people always seems to obey him. he is a king without trying and its a school who has a lot of boy coming from wealthy family but he is above them. he know how to use the weakness of people and he read them so easily, it 's a shame even her with her things with kindness, love and trust. what she has become with him. she come from a fairy tale, she didn't even see her mother try to make her live the life she will have if she don't get pregnant. she don't see she choose a guy like dean because her mother wanted a safe guy for her, she didn't even have the right to do what she want to live for once. and the fact she didn't say anyting to her mother say a lot for rory to act this bold she had to love even if she cant acknowlege that . he is tough, rough even if he keep it under his charm. he comes from a family who has the fight for power and money in his gene and he is not against that, he accept this but before enjoy the carefree life it can give him before he had to take the buisness in hand. he had the beauty of a predator that could easily snap her she ran her hands along his arms she see little scars that served as symbol of a boy that was fighting a civil war in the circle of society in order to rein over the mass. continue it's good
Ghostwriter chapter 1 . 6/16/2009
Great job. Catch ya on the flip side.
analyse.stubbs chapter 1 . 11/15/2008
you my dear are a gift from the GODS!

haha this was amazing

i little trory does the soul good!
Devaney Walsh chapter 1 . 11/15/2008
incredibly well written. i loved it.
toastloaf93 chapter 1 . 11/15/2008
wow its great
princetongirl chapter 1 . 11/14/2008
loved it update soon
DeletingMyAccount chapter 1 . 11/14/2008
I opened my email with a yay! And then read angst and was like boo! LOL.

Anyway, really good and wellwritten. Portrayed the bitterness well. :)

This slightly made me feel better today.

Damn wildfires.

Well I'm off to go see how close the evacuation zone is to my house. *sigh*

Bye!

~~StDAY