oh thank God!

she was just sick. did Carlisle give her antibiotics? she's gna get preggers isn't she...

SHE'S AN IDIOT. AND EDWARD IS A TOOL.

I didn't keep up with this story because of the slow updates but it stayed in my mind and I'd creep back to catch up. I knew it was a long shot but, frankly, I was hoping for a twist at the end where Jacob and Bella's daughter and Edward fell in love.

When Edward left? That wasnt a misunderstanding. That's bullsh*t. A misunderstanding is when you say turn left in the directions and you meant right! That's a misunderstanding. What Edward did is completely disregard Bella's feelings and decide he knew what was best (as he always does)

I wish a small hole would open in Bellas head..like from a gun.

An intense makeout session for hours with the walking corpse?. How does that work without getting hypothermia. Or a terminal case of lip chapping from kissing stone. Bella is necrophiliac I suppose. Sounds like Bella

Why is Bella wet for ol Jake? Well lemme see. Maybe because its not like trying to have sex with a corpse or a sculpture. Maybe because Jake is warm. Maybe because Jake is not an abusive, deceitful, controlling misogynist. Maybe Jake is hotter than that skinny, pale, pasty emo metrosexual fossil from the victorian age. Maybe thats why Bella! Everytime I read about Bella swooning over sparkleboys kisses. I cringe. It is simply creepy. Then again this is Bella

I loved it

The title of "Coming Full Circle" seems all the more fitting in this chapter. Jacob and Bella are separated, and Edward - and the irony is not missed - comforts Bella, after having evolved a bit himself.

Charlie asking Bella if she's on drugs had me cracking up.

A skillful reworking of a timeline major event - the shifting of authority within the wolf pack.

Love Jacob reflecting on his decision - doing right by his heart and doing right by his people. It's great that both Jacob and Bella have much going on outside their relationship.

D'aww, Seth Clearwater! He is such a dear. I love that we see more and more of him as the plot unfolds. He's such an amiable character.

Bella putting on makeup is something new.
I forget that Bella and Jacob have never gone on a conventional date or night out.
But as usual, sparks fly and culminate in another memorable consummation scene.
Not without its suspense and drama, of course!

I like the talk Bella and Jacob had about the future, in light of present circumstances. Blissfully as they are together, they have much to figure out and tend to before getting their own place.

"Just keep it in your pants."
"But I'm not wearing any pants."
Laughed out loud at this.
I like that Billy has a presence. I know you also give Charlie Swan a chance to speak more, letting him transcend whatever potential was compromised in the original novels. One among the multitude of reasons why I like your work :)

Yikes... Jake hit a nerve. He didn't retaliate when Leah struck out at him, though.
Very nice reflective section where you dissected Jacob's respective relationships with Edward and Jacob.

Aww, I love Bella's reunion with the endearing wolf pack :-) Looking forward to re-reading more of their dynamics!

A steamy scene punctuated by Seth's unwarranted entrance.

BORING claptrap that is smply not worth reading.. Nothing to see here folks move along.