The tension and excitement was great. Well done.

If this weren't a Jacob/Bella sorry then Seth and Bella would have fallen in love. 8 months is a long time for them to be living together. Having Jacob come and for so long was simply asking for Bella to be found.

If I was Billy I would have words with Charlie for creating doubts in Jacob.

I like the character development in the story. Bella keeps getting stronger and stronger. I like her standing up to Alice. Edward is also developing as a character and changing in a good way.

Very mature is Jacob to take the fall for Charlie and say he broke up with Bella. Well done.

Emotional chapter, poor Jacob.

This was an exciting chapter. I get that Jacob and Bella are horny teenagers, but jeez... I think we get the point, they really like sex, lol.

Bella is very thoughtful. It is good she is really considering her options and choosing to do what is best for her.

Somehow I have been sucked back into Twilight fanfics, lol. I feel like I may have read this one before but it has been a long time. I like it when Edward isn't portrayed as evil. I'm curious where it all goes.

I will

How have I missed this story until now?! This is so good

Such a sweet well written teenage love story! Your a gifted writer I hope you continue! Lovely story!

Bella is pregnant. That was some halloween night!

Breaking Dawn was definitely a nightmare! It was worse having Jacob imprint with a baby. Then Bella marrying her known as Edward.

Great job! Glad Jake is going to atleast talk to Bella.