Reviews for Coming Full Circle |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Poor Edward! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love the chapter :) On the one side I pity Edward on the other I want to scream at him to just leave them alone multiple personality much ? ;) please update soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was def worth the wait. But please don't so long next time. I have so many questions. I can't wait to see how this plays out. I love this story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thanks for the update. You are making me really happy right now. Though I like Edward, I love Jacob. I am so happy that Edward got put in his place by Jacob no less. Cant wait for more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() this story juss pulls me to team jacob. lol are you going to contine, with the future and jacobs garage and bells writing loft? & the babies? :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Bow chicka wow wow ;D |
![]() ![]() ![]() The story is stilightly OOC, but its a great lemon. Love reading these, we all secretly do ! Great job. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well that was definitely worth the wait! |
![]() ![]() ![]() hot hot hot xP |
![]() ![]() ![]() omgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgm! Awsome awsome chapter...YAY! I'm ready for more ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow, loved it! i was so worried for a minute there, thinking he had imprinted on some other girl. well done for the suspense leading into this chapter! finally got what we all were waiting for and it was written beautifully and very tasteful ! bella is one lucky girl (; haha. thank you again, another fantastic chapter ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() such an awesome update! im so glad he imprinted on bella and his explanation was perfect, much better and more realistic than any of the other fics i read. edwards overreaction makes sense now too :) im looking forward to them getting home and everyone's reactions and all they have ahead of them, that was such a romantic chapter.. now im looking forward to some steamy lemonade ;)! anyways really really good job, please keep writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Youre writing is beyond amazing. I have loved every chapter since I started reading your story, I actually was enjoying their teasing game, but the moment they finally got to make love was . .( tear ) beautiful. Your descriptions have allowed me to visualize everything you mention in the story, thats amazing for an author to do. Keep up the excellent writing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well I must say once again that you are an amazing writer. I liked that Bella freaked out in the begining because that was so true to her character, even though she is a much stronger woman now her true charateristics remain. I was actually saying calm down Bella its not the end, let Jake talk. I love that you tied in the moments of New Moon so well, it really authenticates your story. For some reason Coldplay's Swallowed in the Sea came to mind as Jake was explaining his side of the story. And of course I'm so glad they finally "made love" it was about time! So now I'm excited to see how everyone in La Push and Forks reacts to Jacob and Bella finally being together. Will Bella still be on friendly terms with the Cullens, how will the pack accept Bella, and finally will Charlie be as pro Jacob now that Jacob has won? I love that I'm actually wondering about these things! |