Reviews for Coming Full Circle |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Wow is all I can say! I am still thinking abount the moment before Phil came in. Dammit! Jacob is most certainly a "full-fledged man"! You have definately changed my opinion of Jacob in such a good way :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG, or I mean OMJ! Jacob is so HOT! So I have to say it "Why am I thinking about animals right now?" because you are hooking up with a hot werewolve Bella that's why! I love these lines there so fun I'm totally going to use them for now on! I especially love “What? You’re the one with the dirty mind here. I was just trying to open the lines of communication between us. Excuse me for caring.” It's just so, Jacob! And I totally relate to Bella's "Oh. My. God. Please just let me die right now" I'd rather chew off my right arm then have that conversation with my Mom! You've really captured all of the characters so well! And thank you thank you thank you for giving us a little taste of whats to come (BTW I totally agree with Rene, they're best friends, they're in love,... )! Finally I totally agree with Bella, Damn you Phil! Write more please! Pretty please! with Sugar on top! : ) |
![]() ![]() ![]() ok. ok. I am finally reviewing! I have been a fan since the 1st chapter and I have to say it keeps getting better and better...Bella is turning out to be the character we all wished she was in the original series and with that, choosing Jacob! I can't wait to see what what happens next because I am sure it's not going to just be happily ever after... |
![]() ![]() ![]() LOL, she will be so embarassed ;) nice chapter please update soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am absolutely loving this story! I love that Bella finally has a backbone and I have a huge soft spot for Jacob. Can't wait to read more. and Damn Phil! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome chapter! Is Jacob gong to howl when the time comes! If you know what I mean. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Double damn you Phil, no curse you Phil! Oh that Jake's a freaking bonafide hottie. Bells has more control than I ever did in my hormone-lust-filled teen years. But damn Phil, why you being a c_ck bloker for? |
![]() ![]() ![]() hahahah! such a funny ending! damn you phil! i actually laughed at that, what a perfect ending to a chapter i love how mature you've made bella and jacob in this fic, they definitely seem beyond their years and more like seniors then some other fics show them to be theyre relatiobship has developed really well even though this is what? the 7th chapter? they dont seem to have moved fast at all cause you've built a really good foundation for them as a couple with their talks and things they do, the dialogue is funny and perfect i can tell this story is far from happily ever after with what edward implied but i am happy about the hint of a lemon ;) i hope a full one comes soon too *winks* anyways ive babbled enough but i really love this story, youre an awesome writer seriously keep it up! |
![]() ![]() ![]() yay! i really enjoyed this chapter. i love teh dynamic between these two. the way they can just talk for hours and its just natural. that jacob can be cheeky and bella can be silly and it doesn't matter cuase its just who they are. loved the bit about renee being bella's wingman. made me laugh. so did the "oh jake!" and thankyou for teh sexy bit at the end. can't wait for you to update. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() im so glad i found this story! i love it! one of my favorite bella jacob storys ever! this is a really emotional fic with alot of good descriptions and feelings, its very verbal and i can perfectly feel the emotions while i read it, you're very talented what did edward hear when he said jacob would hurt her someday? has jacob already imprinted? hm i dont understand but i am happy with bellas descion, it has me convinced that it was the choice she should've made in eclipse! i hope by some miracle jacob can imprint on her later or something? i've read some fics where they manipulate the plot and make it plausible anyways really awesome story! keep up the great writing and update asap! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh lord, I hope that Jacob won'thurt Bella the way Sam hurt his girl. But still a fab chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's about time Edward is told how much of a jackass he was being! You go Bella...stay strong. I love it. Keep up the good work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Another great chapter! Good job! I really love that you have taken this story in a different direction. We have all read Stephenie Meyer's version, but your version is refreshing and really depicts Bella as a true modern day woman with real modern day woman concerns. You have truly grasped the concept of fan fiction in your story. Just in case anyone is not clear about the definition of fiction or fan fiction I have included them both: Fiction: something feigned, invented, or imagined; a made-up story: Fan Fiction: fictional account written by a fan of a show, movie, book, or video game to explore themes and ideas that will not or cannot be explored via the originating medium. So keep up the good work! I know all of the Jacob/Bella fans and everyone who bothers to look at the description of your story before they read it and write an unnecessary review is looking forward to chapter 7! |
![]() ![]() ![]() First of all, I'ld like to clear up something for Kelly. This is a FANFICTION! I'm not sure if you understand the meaning of fanfiction; which is various writers take characters and/or plot points from another work and create there own twist on things. This situation is clearly a what if Bella took more time to clear things up and discover her inner strength, finding Jacob to be her other half as opposed to Edward. Obviously it cannot follow the flow of the Twilight series as we have already discovered how that ended. Remember this is a peice of work that took the author time and energy to create and you should respect it by only adding positive comments or nothing at all. Now, for toldforthis, I love it! It took my breathe away how much more confident and mature Bella has become. Even the really mean things she said to Edward were true to the storyline. Yes, Edward left. Yes, Edward kept certain truths from Bella. I love that you've taken the time to get so familiar with the series so your able to bring up such minor details that are such a hidden treasures to true fans. Being a proud team Switzerland fan, I'm happy as long as Bella ends up with either, and it looks as if Jacob will get this round! I cant wait for things to steam up between Jacob and Bella (hint hint nudge nudge)! I also hope that Bella can still be friends with at least Alice, although I'd love for Edward to still be around (as a friend)! Keep up the excellent work and don't let the haters bring you down! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love it! |