Reviews for Coming Full Circle |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome chapter! Finally, Edward is put in his place. Jacob is the MAN! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am so happy to see Bella stand up for herself and infuriated that even after all that, Edward still doesn't seem to get it. Really enjoying this story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I must say I am a little sad for Edward. It's just so final now amd it takes a little getting used to. OK-I'm over him and ready for Jacob:) I really think Bella is exactly how I picture her to be, if not even better. I am so excited for more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved this one the conversation between bella and edward was awesome please update soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well if it doesn't work out with Jacob, she already has a back up plan! Nice! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Onoz! What is Jake gonna do? I love how you have Bella tell Edward off and actually hav some back-bone. I knew he was in Flordia the whole time. Update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This rocks! you must have the best Beta in the world! I can't wait for the next chapter! I have this story flagged to update me when you post...please hurry the next one! You are such a good writer keep up the good work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh the suspense! plz plz PLZ update soon! i love the rebuttal bella gave about edward being an eclipse, how it doesn't last forever, the sun always comes back. you're a great writer and i've been looking for a good bella/jacob story for a while, thanks for making my day : D srsly though, this is awesome, i can't wait for more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh I hate when they call him "dog". I loved the chapter. All the kissing and being open about their feelings. Can't wait for the next update. I guess in Jake's euphoria, he missed Edward's scent. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ok I think I've officially gone "full circle" because I love Jake! What a great way for them to reunite, I love love love it! I'm so glad to see a stronger, more confident Bella! And I knew Edward was hanging around, Bella had one request and of course Edward has to take matters into his own hands. This makes loving Jake so much easier! Ok, now I want more so get to writing! |
![]() ![]() I haven't reviewed in a while...this feels so weird. *ahem, over here* Wha-? Oh, thanks. Heh, sorry 'bout that; just, ah, thinking to meself. But I have got to review this chapter. The JacobBella in this chapter was so good. Kudos on the talk with Renee from the last chapter as well, by the way. And I agree with the reviewer who said that they like your Bella better. She is so much better, you've improved here greatly. I imagine this is what she'd be like if SM hadn't made her so... stupid, I believe is the word I'm looking for. Stupid and blind and not sensible whatsoever. Yours is a great girl who is interesting to read about (even her rambles), one that I'd actually like in real life. This last development is certainly interesting. I was half-scared you'd just leave the story there and forget about the Leech Luvah. I can't wait to see where you take this. The only thing I hope-but of course I will not tell you how to write your story- is that she doesn't somehow hurt Jacob again and that she does make it very clear to Edward that she's sorted out her feelings. Anyways, great chapter and story over all; and I really, really hope you keep writing for this pairing because it is something I just can't get enough of and you do it oh-so-very-well. Thank you! PF |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am so enjoying the HOT over the COLD! Bella finally knows who she wants and I fully agree with her choice! How is Edward going to react to all of this? I can't wait to find out :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Uh oh, busted! Both guys just can't stay away from Bella hehe. I'm actually glad Jake went over to Jacksonville to see her to tell her off...it only turned out for the better, with them actually getting together instead :) But I loved loved loved this chapter with all the J/B love. I love your Bella, the way she's taking the time to actually think things through and her being completely honest with Jake when he was asking her those questions. Finally, she has come to her senses. Now I will sit here and wait patiently for the next chapter ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() LOVE IT ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() WOWOWOWOWOW! xD this ch was so GOOD! :D :o WTF. damn you Edward! gtfo! update soon! T_T :] |