Reviews for Coming Full Circle
kouga's older woman chapter 5 . 12/8/2008
I still think everyone would be a lot happier if they would learn how to share!
Packleader23 chapter 5 . 12/8/2008
Great chapter! Dogs are not only man's best friends but Bella's best friend also.
madameXblack chapter 5 . 12/8/2008
Onoz... they've been caughted!

Please don't let her go back to Eddiepuss...

This is such an amazing story and chapter!
notashamedtobe chapter 4 . 12/5/2008
Ohh where's my Jake? Maybe off to Florida to get his woman? I can only hope!
Hecate's Diamon chapter 4 . 12/4/2008
NO! But I love Jacob! He must come back!

Personally, I think Team Jacob have more love for Jacob than Edward fans have for Edward because in the end, Jacob loses :(

But hopefully, this story will turn that around! You have to update soon!
Hecate's Diamon chapter 2 . 12/4/2008
Aww! I cried at the end of New Moon when Bella told hims he was choosing Edward, and, I'm not gonna lie, this made the lump rise in my throat too. Poor Jacob :(
fairy-wannabe chapter 4 . 12/4/2008
i hope a lot of E/B'ers read this story. How can they doubt Jacob and Bella's relationship when it is set out so plainly and reasonably for them.

this is fantastically written. authors dont always take the time to flesh out Bella's thought process and i think it is something that is important.

and can i also mention how much i love your Bella? its like you are writing her as exactly the character i wished smeyer had written her. she is making ALL the right decisions so far.

i hope you update soon. :)
Olivia Wilder chapter 4 . 12/3/2008
This just keeps getting better and better! I love your take on Bella...what do you know she actually has a brain in this version! I think this is what any modern woman would have gone through...can't wait for the next chapter!
misscoolgirl chapter 4 . 12/3/2008
I am loving this story! I'm glad Bella is taking the time to actually think about what she really wants and what could be best for her *coughJacobcough* hehe. Great story and very well written. Now I wonder where Jake is? Please update soon!
kouga's older woman chapter 4 . 12/2/2008
Maybe he's in Florida?
overthedeepend chapter 4 . 12/2/2008
I Love it! No more poor Edward! I love, love, love the pros and cons of both of them. Any TRUE fan will have to sit back and agree with the reasoning behind it! And Bella's thoughts and talking in her sleep are equally entertaining! Can't wait for the coming chapters! Thank you so much for giving me something to look forward to since almost everything is finished, until march at least. : )
DANADANE chapter 4 . 12/2/2008
Bella is so incredible! She is doing things only for herself and is seeing what SHE really wants. As much as I love Edward (and trust me I do!), I am so excited for the possibility of her and Jacob. PLEASE KEEP WRITING!
Elleneverupdates chapter 4 . 12/1/2008
Very good !
WannabeWolfe chapter 4 . 12/1/2008
This was a great chapter. I really like it when Bella actually takes care of herself!
Ren2323 chapter 4 . 12/1/2008
NO!

Jacob come back! Dx

LOL, this story is getting better and better. :D

Keep it up!
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