Reviews for Coming Full Circle |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Great Story. Keep writing. Jacob rules! |
![]() ![]() ![]() that amazing! i loved bella and renee's mother-daughter heart-to-heart. please come back jakie! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Pick Jacob! Pick Jacob! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very well written! I love how you've captured the pull Bella feels between Edward and Jacob. You really believe that she is in love with both of them, but how to choose. In the original novels it was almost too easy. I also like Bella's independence in this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am hooked! I really feel for Bella and understand her dilemna. How do you choose? Especially with Edward's "crooked smile plastered on his face". :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story! Is Jacob sneaking to go with her? If Edward finds out, I'm sure he'll follow and it will be war! I still think that if they both really love her and she really loves both of them, to make her happy, they should learn to share so that she won't feel presured to chose! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well well well you tricky little devil you! Trying to sneek on another chapter, thank God I was actually doing homework and had my laptop on! I love the twists your throwing are way. I especially LOVE Bella tripping down the stairs, is there a little background with that subject, seems familiar? Also I love the "deranged little pixie's" gifts great way to intro that! I must admit I'm becoming more and more confused, who do I love Jacob, Edward, Jasper, or movie Emmett and James?...sigh, what a tough life I live! Keep up the great work! Oh love the wishful thinking at the end, I so relate to that one! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a great story! Very well written...I love the cliffhangers at the end of each chapter. Can't wait to see who she ends up with...at this point it looks like it can go either way. Keep up the good work. Can't wait for the next installment! |
![]() ![]() ![]() E!So far I love it! I am a Jacob lover and its great to find others who feel the same way I do! Great start, I wish I had a Jacob dream like that! Can't wait to see where the story takes us, hopefully even hotter scenes? Pretty much I want more so forget work, family, or whatever, and write! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loving this so far! I'm adding it to my alerts. Also, I totally feel you - Edward is all well and good, but Jacob is what sparked my obsession with these books. I never dreamed I'd write fanfic, least of all that I'd start doing it at the age of 26, but J/B was irresistible I guess. Sigh. Anyway, hope you update soon :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great first 2 chapters - I can't wait to read the next. Hope you update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG! I love Jacob! Good story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Is she going away to try to figure out hoe she can keep them both? Cause it doesn't look like she is even trying to stick with fust the one she is marrying! |
![]() ![]() ![]() AWESOME! I am glad Bella is taking some time for herself. Especially after that HOT dream! |