Ten chapters left this has been a JOURNEY lordt

Calf cramps are the worst man. I got one in a pool once and thought I was dying. I was sore for days. Poor Bella lol

Aww I wanted a baby lol

Nooooo not the hair I’m crying

Oh I knew all the fluff was too good to be true. Dammit.

Lol “ta-da!” A tiny horn plays

Oh that’s rude. I seriously thought she was awake

I am not sure if I like this Edward. He just doesn’t listen. ... maybe that is the problem from the beginning. He never listened to Bella. Well he did in the beginning. But every book after twilight... he didn’t. I hope and pray Jacob imprints on Bella next chapter. Rub it in Edwards face for not listening and being mean to Jacob.

I hadn't been commending while reading because i know you wrote this years ago, but I loved every detail, great job!

Ew why did you make his hair chin length that's so gross now I have that image of him... The story was really good though! Lol

Just finished, one of the best twilight fanfics i have read in a long time. Thank you so much for writing!

Duuuude. That. Was. The. Best. Story. EVER. I'm so sad it's over! Jakella for life. This is how Breaking Dawn should have been! I love you for making my dream story come true! You are truly amazing, and I appreciate your hard work and dedication on this story even though you did finish it a few years ago. But I loved it from start to finish anyways. THANK YOU!

Great story

Wow! This is the best FF I have ever read. It was interesting to see how your writing progressed over the years. I never could accept how the twilight saga ended after all these years. THIS is how it should have ended.

No hay palabras, simplemente maravillosa está historia, Ojalá escribieras más. Tienes otras historias? Aquí en fan fiction, sólo está está. Muchas gracias y felicitaciones.