Reviews for Taking Responsibility |
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![]() ![]() Amazing |
![]() ![]() What a great story! Loved the plot but wish I could’ve gotten more from the ending! Amazing story line though |
![]() ![]() ![]() I know blossom is the leader but I feel she is acting more like a leader and less like a sister, it seems unfair how she makes all the decisions and rarely listens to what anyone else says. |
![]() ![]() ![]() im crying...im seriously crying...the story is just too AWESOME THNX FOR MAKING THIS STORY |
![]() ![]() ![]() All that build up just for that ass ending with the Rowdyruff boys. Damnit. |
![]() ![]() Looooved the story. I couldn't stop reading. I wish the relationships between the boys and girls had developed more. But, I loved how you made sure to give glimpses as to what could possibly be in the future and it didn't seem to forced or like a cheesy romcom ending: it was realistic. Although, I don't like the fact that the boys don't have their powers anymore I understand. The saddest part about this whole thing is I really wanted to see Bubbles use her knives, Blossom looking fierce with her Sia, and Buttercup bashing someone with her bo. Overall, loved it. I loved the fact you persevered and finished but most importantly and how much energy/love you put into making an amazing story. I could really see how much you knew, loved, and cared about the characters, as well as, how well thought out the story was. Thank you for the great read. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh wow where do I even start? I am so glad I stumbled up in this story, to be honest I wish I had done it sooner. This defiently answers the question I always asked myself when ever I saw the Powerpuffgirls movie of "What if they never returned?" This story was beautifully written and flowed smoothly while giving out massive amounts of information. The character development is amazing. Like, at first Blossom is too scared and paranoid to do anything outside of her comfort zone and does everything with caution. Then, in the end she smashes Mojos computer without second thought and is determined to take Mojo, no thoughts of her failing in her mind. Other characters like Buttercup who didnt even want to be in the same room as the Proffesor but then forgives him and accepts him as her father is also a very good example. Also, while reading I couldnt help but notice how everything seemed so knowledgeable, like it was well researched and it just amazes me. Everytime I started a new chapter and saw notes at the top I would read them and keep an eye out for it throughout the chapter. Another thing is along with the story being beautifully written it also had an amazing plot. First off, it was unreadable. The story constantly had me guessing what comes next or had me on the edge of my seat. Second, as the characters acted much like themselves it was interesting to see that they were catching onto every little thing that happened and had doubt, like Brick thought Cammy was Blossom, or Boomer constantly thought about Bubbles reflexesl. That is something most writers dont do to make the climax a suprise but this approach created unbearable suspense and I loved it. I spent three days reading your story and I dont regret it at all. I even stayed up until midnight just so I could finish it. I figured after I read I go to sleep and first thing I do when I wake up is write a review because that what this story, and you, deserve. Now that I have written a novel declaring my love for you and this story I think its time I bring it to a close. This story was beyond amazing and you were honestly the best person to have written it. Thank you for writing this story and I will defiently check out your other storuse! (Idk if you do but if you do I will lol) |
![]() ![]() ![]() This has always been one of my favorite fanfics and I love your writing. Every couple of years or so I come back to this fanfic and I’m sucked right back in just like the first time, I can’t find it in me to stop reading it. This was a phenomenal read and I love the way you wrote all of the characters, thank you for blessing get all of us with this story! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting! |
![]() ![]() ![]() nice story. very nice. wasn't much romance but u pulled it amazingly. you wrote them perfectly just like their personality. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loving this so far |
![]() ![]() ![]() In-cre-dib-le. There were hardly any “romantic” moments throughout the story - which is what most people are here for - yet, you still managed to reel in every person’s attention to the cast and MAINTAINED that interest through actual plot devices. That’s amazing! Well done, Somewei. You’re amazing. |
![]() ![]() I have finally found the fanfic that's better than published authors. Oh my gosh, this story was wild from start to finish. Never read such a great fanfic. Keep up the good work! |
![]() ![]() Avfrbefb Negbeg genfwfbwf ref e.g. Rhnjtvwbwrv ITS OVER?! AND BRICK AND BLOSSOM NEVER OFFICIALLY BECAME A COUPLE?! HSJSBEKJSBSJWJSHSJWJWVJWHS |
![]() ![]() ![]() good story did not like the ending for the RRB |