Reviews for Ultimate SpiderWoman: Change With the Light
Bigou chapter 105 . 9/6
Nice to see this story is still going, and with another great chapter. You're really good at giving that super-heroes comics feel to your story, regardless of them being pure prose.
Jackejsh chapter 105 . 9/6
Thanks for the chapter!
Shiranai Atsune chapter 104 . 6/22
Yey! A new update!

So happy to be reading more of this!
RHJunior chapter 1 . 10/10/2019
She sorta jumps from "ah, I'm a mutant!" to "let's put on a costume and fight violent criminals!" kind of quick. A superhero fan nut might jump right in but a normal, moderately sensible person would at least hesitate for a day or two, or until circumstances evolved where they HAD to go be superheroic. After all, it's bloody dangerous work where people SHOOT at you!
Guest chapter 42 . 5/6/2019
The story has entered a new stage of tedious repetition. The earlier story largely consisted of fights that went "someone knocked their opponent down, but they got up surprisingly quickly and won," and modeling jobs which everyone obsess over her looks in exactly the same way. The villains view was there but it was split between the edgelord "big bad" Jack-o'-lantern and the villain of the week.

Now it seems like more than half of each chapter is literally just edgelord and his sock puppets. More people are taking up more space to repeat the exact same thing. It's even more tedious than before since at least there was a mixture of different repetitive components.

Villains views can be interesting, though with a few exceptions putting focus on their viewpoints simply reveal how facile their views truly are. Once it's established though the only reason you need to come back to it is if there's a change either in circumstance or worldview. Which, fair enough, edgelord and his sock puppets keep getting news of how reality disagrees with their stupid worldview so they shift the goalposts. The problem is that the story checks back in on every tiny change in circumstances to see if there is anything different in their worldview. Spoiler alert, not once they come to the conclusion that their system was perfect and a complete novelty, they basically keep blaming every problem on his successor.

The single deviation that comes to mind is the creepy stalker, which was redundant as his motivations have pretty much been explained already. Nothing in his worldview has changed since his perceived betrayal and nothing in his circumstances changing require his perspective.

Basically the only justification for ever returning to an edgelord sock puppet's perspective is if one of those sock puppets take over the organization and edgelord and his other sock puppets blame them for both normal setbacks and their stupid ideology's stupid flaws. Absent that there really shouldn't be as many of their perspectives bouncing around in the story right now.
Radio Driver chapter 100 . 12/7/2018
Good goin, Jared. Keep on keepin on.
Nimbus Llewelyn chapter 100 . 12/6/2018
Intriguing. Also, yeah, incels are the worst.
Bigou chapter 99 . 12/1/2018
I hadn't read the new chapters in some times, and I must say, this story is still as good as ever.
Radio Driver chapter 98 . 6/7/2018
Good goin, Jared. Keep on keepin on.
Radio Driver chapter 96 . 2/28/2018
Good going, Jared. Keep on keepin on.
Axcel chapter 1 . 1/30/2018
Mary Jane is famous for her red hair. You...said her hair is black... HERESY! *BLAM!*
OlivertomixOO7 chapter 95 . 11/14/2017
Awesome story boss. Totally love it. Keep writing this amazing story.
Radio Driver chapter 94 . 10/17/2017
Good going, Jared. Keep on keeping on.
Rydrake011 chapter 33 . 7/13/2017
Good chapter. However I'm pissed she didn't kill the evil motherfucker.
Radio Driver chapter 92 . 5/8/2017
Good goin, Jared. Keep on keepin on.
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