Reviews for To Take A Stand
Amu4ever chapter 2 . 2/17
Okay, okay. So, your paragraphs are way too long. You should really make tem shorter.

Also, the pace of your story is a bit slow. I don't know, if it was mainly the first facter, that made me loose interests or both, but you should really look over your chapters again.

I found myself skipping paragraphs pretty quickly, but that could be, because it's very tiring to read so lengthy paragraphs.

I am not trying to offend you here, so, please don't take this as an insulft. It's only meant to be constructive critic and my honest opinion.
Amu4ever chapter 1 . 2/17
*sigh* So, I did find the basic idea great, that you portrayed with the Summary. But to be honest I always have disliked it when side-characters are put more in the centre of attention than the main.

Especially in the beginning the main character(s) should be the focus of the story.

(Of course that doesn't apply for all stories and it's my opinion, but it fits for more stories than not.)
The World in Black and White chapter 9 . 11/27/2013
Great story! I can't wait until the next chapter! Please update soon :)
Guest chapter 6 . 5/30/2013
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Guest chapter 5 . 5/30/2013
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bill560682 chapter 2 . 2/19/2013
i do like the fact harry is NOT the sub in this story.
HPkitty chapter 9 . 6/16/2012
Very well-written, and Kiri is adorable. Update soon?
Silvermane1 chapter 9 . 1/15/2012
cool please continue
Death's Flower chapter 9 . 1/3/2012
You updated! Yay! Well written but please update soon, I would love to know what happens next!

DF.
Makurayami Ookami chapter 9 . 12/28/2011
well written. so glad they got him back. i've been thinking about this story for weeks and had actually asked someone what it was and then boom you updated hehe.
suprNEONligt chapter 8 . 9/21/2011
ok, I love the Loveless Anime and that song! I have it on my iPod! I love this story please continue!
Reads-way-2-much chapter 8 . 7/21/2011
Well, hopefully this will compel(sp?) you to write again after ANOTHER year lol, I LOVE THIS! OMG! lol ive always loved harry/oc pairing and most people make harry the sub so its cool to see it the other way around well anyway i hope you update again :)
Orpheus Thanatos Messiah chapter 8 . 5/6/2011
Ya know, it's been a couple of months since the last update and you leave us off at a very intense cliff-hanger. I really don't want to be like those nagging idjits that simply demand updates to stories, 'cause I know how I react when they do it to me, so I'll simply say that I hope the creative juices for this story hasn't ended. It's to good to be given such a despairing death!
Sir StalkingWarrior chapter 8 . 2/9/2011
Omfg ur killing me... So much wild and untamed emotion the intensity for which u write! But I don't enjoy these long updates! Plz plz plz update again soon! I wanna know watz gunna happen to kiri and I'm hopin Harry wins in the end and that Ron gets a sound bearing by kiri! Mwahahahahahahaha!
Sir StalkingWarrior chapter 4 . 2/8/2011
very cute chappy! Hehe ry And kiri aré soo adorable...hehe I like how ry is pretty much rapped around kiri's lil finger already and the kiss was a ver funny scene. Oh I think Ron should be bad and then get shipped off to die and his sister ginny to! Mwahahahaha! Get genuine a better person to be with her... Maybe Draco will come into a creature inheritance and hemione could be his mate... Lol onward!
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