|Reviews for Underwater Friends|
| Riri-kins chapter 1 . 10/1/2010
Eeee! Now this is what I like to see in fanfiction! What wonderful characterization! I can totally hear Dethklok saying every single line in this story.
I think my favorite parts are Offdensen's confusion after Toki kills his fish and Skwisgaar hitting on the saleswoman. It's totally something Skwisgaar would do. XD
Great work. I hope to see more from you in this fandom.
| The March Hatter chapter 1 . 2/21/2010
well you know what they say if at firs they don't succeed . . . get them something alot harder to fail at. this was too cute! and very toki-ish. and i'm guessing that that pet library is now full of crabs as well as fish! heh just kidding
| The Great Allie chapter 1 . 12/17/2009
I love how the yard wolves were at the beginning and looped around to the end. That kind of consistency makes it feel very professional. Toki is so adorable, too. I love Bettas. I had one once, but he died of tank shock. I like 'em because they don't play well with others, like me. And clearly this one is no exception.
Too bad everything Toki touches with his love is doomed to die. Maybe since this isn't canon Loki'll be okay. Here's hopin'.
| redwingsgirl514 chapter 1 . 9/11/2009
I love it, I love it, I LOVE it! Oh my heavens. Laughed til I cried, and now my dogs are looking at me like I've gone nuts.
“Is impressive reallys,” Skwisgaar commented to Pickles, who was methodically knocking his forehead against the doorframe. “He kills whole family of fishes in one try. Takes less dan two seconds.”
I felt so bad for Toki and his fish, but at least Loki seems to be a little more hardy.
And Pickles needed to be drunk before going into the pet store. *snort*
And so it came to pass that the pitter-patter of little paws was heard up and down the long, dark halls of Mordhaus. It was just as well that no one knew what kind of carnage would soon be wrecked by the teething jaws of doom, what utter destruction would be the result of a rapidly growing wolf pup and his sometimes hyperactive, always fun-loving owner over the coming weeks and months.
Ya think they guys could appreciate how "brutal" having a puppy is, never mind a WOLF puppy. :)
| Korosuhito chapter 1 . 4/27/2009
| Narcis chapter 1 . 2/16/2009
Awesome stuff. It was hilarious xD I could picture this being an actual episode. Byebye fishies!
| FancePance chapter 1 . 12/21/2008
This had me laughing all the way through! Way cool, way metal! Poor fish, lol.
| Marhaba chapter 1 . 11/26/2008
This is AWESOME! Very funny and in character-I could easily see this as an actual episode. Excellent job.
| xxSpade's Ace chapter 1 . 11/19/2008
That seemed exactly like an episode! I adore Toki, and his misadventures with the fish were fucking hilarious. I seriously laughed out loud throughout the whole thing. Kudos to you!
| Lolita Lockett chapter 1 . 11/17/2008
Ahah, this is actually rather canon-ish. Everyone was very IC. Poor Toki
I could actually see this as an actual Metalocalypse episode. _ Good job!
| Basia Lynn chapter 1 . 11/14/2008
I love you for writing this. Seriously. You are awesomely talented and DEFINITELY did the show justice! And it was hilarious. :D