i 3 the ending.. especially the last line.

'Kay...

Normally I would have already written a review when I read this story for the first time, but I never really had the time to do that.

So now after reading this FF for the... (I stopped counting sorry XD ) I am gonna write one. (after all you reminded me with that message of yours )

I really do love this story.

And most of all this chapter XD .

I think it's the perfect ending for this story, I just LOVE Byakuyas reaction XD .

Just genius...

Definitly need to read more of your stories...

That will be difficult since I already read most of them but, hey, I can try ;)

Bye, Susan

Hooray! I got this from the creator of that fantastic picture on DA. And it is great! Its really beautiful and matches the illustration to a tee :D

Bravo!

Wow, great story. Great spin, I really like the witch idea and very well written.

hahaha I LOVED Byakuya in this! He was so acute and sarcastic... definitely a favourite story! Description was brilliant, and the storyline was really good D

I completely adore your story. I loved the details of the environment and the background. The interaction between Rukia and Byakuya. The intimate moments between Ichigo and Rukia. I have read your story three times and I always feel happy and joyous after reading it. I love the last part where Renji tells Byakuya that he should send more chocolate to Rukia and Byakuya responds that chocolate was the first thing that spoiled Rukia*LOL* Looking forward to more of your stories. :-)

dear Aalicia! What a cute story it was. Brilliantly written )

I haven't been around much to read and write but Im glad your story was a good returnback read for me X) I have to tell you that it suits pretty well with Peca's art.

Aw, this is such a cute story D

I loved it! Keep up the good work.

Claudia.

haha! the ending was funny! i liked how byakuya said chocolate spoiled her. nice touch there. and with ichigo being russian. never woulda thought, but he is tall enough, isn't he...? lol anyway, i thought this story was cute. and again, i liked the chocolate thing.

well, keep writing, and i'll probably read some of your other stuff!

- wolf's paradise

Oh my... I just can't believe that I finished 2 of your stories in one day and truth to be told I have final exam next week! Your style of writing really intrigued me. Anyway, I really like Byakuya in this story..hahaha..:)

AHH, I loved it! I'm glad there was a happy ending - The story was very romantic and the plot was great. Awesome job! I look forward to reading your future IchiRuki fics!

AW! This story was too cute!

So deep and soo romantic! It was very creative and it flowed nicely too!

sighh..

And damn, that was some mind-blowing smut you've written.

On the whole, you're an awesome writer!

Cheers,

IchigoRukiaforever

I really liked your fic. It was a bit short, but i guess sometimes it's better this way. The descriptions were simply wonderful, and the lemon was really well written. I mean, it's rare that you get to stumble on something that has the erotic parts so well written, making it seem like lovemaking, not just sex.

Fav, totally.

Okay, I just read through this story and while I reackon there are more unnessicary words in here then needs be; THIS FIC IS AWESOME :o) *wrinkles eyes in big Kakashi-like grin*

Serious man, this is so wicked-kol ... that I can't even say.

It's enticing, that's what it is. I passed up FOOD just to read this fic! So it must be pretty friken aw3sum.

Props and kudos and all the good stuff to you man, righteously done job ... haha! who knew chocolate was so good huh?

Ja ne

I have read most Rukia/Ichigo fanfictions (10 words) that exist on this site. Though there are few similar to yours with the theme of "Rukia as a witch", the originality of Ichigo being placed as a Russian soldier drew me to read this tale, and after doing so, to add it to My Favorites.

Originally I was not going to review for this story—which takes fault on my part, not yours. I generally prefer to not review whatsoever, unless something truly compels me to do so. In this case, your message of thanks to me had quite surprised me. Never have I ever received a message of thanks for favoring a story, so now, I suppose, I am expressing my version of thanks by submitting this review.

In addition, I figured that I might as well submit my feedback concerning "Once Miracle" since I am already submitting this:

Your usage of diction was excellent. Numerous fanfictions on this site contains poor usage of diction and/or grammar; I applaud "Once Miracle" for its use of descriptive adjectives, phrases, statements, and the like.

On the other hand, your usage of diction was also your downfall. Now remember that “diction” can be defined as “the writer’s choice of words, phrases, sentence structures, and figurative language”. Though your choice of language and words in any phrase was superb, I believe that the phrases within a sentence structure could have been rearranged in order that the sentence itself could flow more smoothly. One way to fix this is by removing unnecessary/superfluous commas—if the sentence sounds alright without the comma in it, then it is most likely alright to leave said comma out. Another is by replacing, removing, or merging a word/phrase so that an extra comma can be removed. Something I have noticed as I have reread your story is the surplus of phrases that exist throughout the tale; several commas could have been removed, several unnecessary words could have been deleted, and several phrases could have been rewritten and combined in such a way that the message within a particular sentence would have been conveyed across to the reader despite the loss of select words.

To end this [rather long ;] review with a positive note, I greatly appreciated the arrangement and progression of the plot between characters in both past and present (I will not elaborate much here, as this is an open review available to any reader's viewing pleasure :]). I do wish that you could have elaborated more on that second miracle, as the lack of it left more to be desired. I must admit, though, that Byakuya's final statement concerning Rukia and chocolate was my favorite throughout this entire tale—it really was quite clever and had taken me a moment to recollect just why Byakuya would ever state that. XD

*The definition for diction was found at .