|Reviews for Bindsided|
| CHARLI chapter 12 . 4/8/2010
very good story, although I tend to like stories more centered on actually characters rather then OC's. and one of the other reviewers is correct, you need either spell check and really good beta or something.
you're writing is good, would be better if you fix the spelling, misused words in future stories..they can get distracting.
| Cassandra30 chapter 3 . 1/16/2009
Woot! Excellent chapter! Wow! This guy is spooky!
| Cassandra30 chapter 2 . 1/16/2009
This is a great story! I am enjoying thoroughly! But you seriously need a spell checker, my friend. While some of these words are spelled right they are misused
a doctor heals, the heels of your feet
a trader trades goods or items, a traitor betrays you
This story is imaginative, exciting, innovative and mysterious! :)
| Cassandra30 chapter 1 . 1/16/2009
Morgan still has a problem? He will get his comeuppance then! hee hee Excellent beginning! Interesting and exciting!
| prophet144 chapter 9 . 12/26/2008
Just one thing I didn't notice the first time I read this one: Marine Corps boot camp is 16 weeks long.
| prophet144 chapter 12 . 12/16/2008
Very cool. I loved this show growing up. Even have two copies of the entire series on DVD including the pilot movie.
| snn7b chapter 12 . 12/8/2008
Wow. This got good. Great job. I hope there is more?
| snn7b chapter 10 . 12/6/2008
Another great chapters to this story. More please. I wanna see what happens to Matt and his brother and don't make them die. Don't stop...
| snn7b chapter 5 . 11/28/2008
Man this is great. keep going. Don't stop.
I loved this show. I also love that they have a little sister. Do you have anyting in stories of how and
what it was like when they were kids?
Keep going please. MORE!