Reviews for Empty House
lacklusters chapter 1 . 5/15
this is so good
Guest chapter 7 . 2/3
YES. the conversation between Yamcha and Eighteen was so well done and definitely needed. Loving this story!
Guest chapter 16 . 2/1
Why would she be so scared of Vegeta? She was fine with him on Namek and afterwards.
jbadillodavila chapter 1 . 8/31/2017
Genial b
Kitty in the Box chapter 26 . 4/11/2017
OMG am I so glad that I read this one and you already finished it. I had to re read the chapters because I needed to feel the beautiful pain and cry my eyes out all over again. I needed it. you are an incredible writer and you totally dug deep into the characters. everything felt so real and practical and sensible and awesome. I love love love this. thank you for sharing this.
Secret.Identities chapter 24 . 4/8/2017
Love how you showed Goku's struggles too.
Secret.Identities chapter 23 . 4/8/2017
You just HAD to keep us hanging.
Secret.Identities chapter 7 . 4/8/2017
That was completely unexpected yet something so much more heart-wrenching than death. The possibilities...
Secret.Identities chapter 2 . 4/8/2017
Whoo... dramatic.
To be sure that they can bring her back using the dragon balls, they could sort of... kill her themselves then bring her back. That way her death was definitely not from natural cause, but 'murder' instead. How painful it would be to do that, though.
Why hasn't Goku gone for a senzu bean? Or started hunting for the balls so that they can wish for her to be fully healed? I guess it's because it would defeat the plot of the story? haha.
jplaya2023 chapter 2 . 4/4/2017
what happened to the senzu beans, or dende, or the dragonballs making bulma well again?
Butane Baby chapter 25 . 3/5/2017
Loved it all. I also took some twisted pleasure seeing your Goku receive the scolding he so well deserved.
Butane Baby chapter 15 . 3/5/2017
This was a great chapter - and totally, devastatingly heartbreaking. The portrayal of a little boy needing his mom's attention and acknowledgement is spot-on.
Butane Baby chapter 7 . 3/5/2017
The passage with Dr. Brief's memories of Bulma and Vegeta is beautiful. I have loved every chapter so far, but for some reason this got me.
ladyg228 chapter 25 . 12/21/2016
This was such an amazing story! For a second there I was OH HELL NO YAMCHA... haha but thank goodness he didn't go that path! The saiyan prince would of murdered that fool. This is definitely one of my favorite V&B stories and one you can read over and over again
Guest chapter 23 . 12/1/2016
I love you for this chapter, especially the whole Gohan at the top of the staircase :D
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