Reviews for Empty House |
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Geurtg chapter 1 . 10/14/2023 Buena historia |
pwtcmcneil chapter 1 . 3/15/2022 feel like I need to mention that the DragonBalls exist, but maybe that's mentioned in the story somewhere, but they have Shenron and Porunga, im sure if Shenron couldn't fix it then Goku could Instant Transmission over to Namek and call up Porunga. |
Protos Heis chapter 26 . 3/11/2022 Thanks for your story. I'll definitely read the sequel. Thank goodness there's still more to this! |
Protos Heis chapter 25 . 3/11/2022 I don't like the idea about Trunks knowing what Vegeta and Bulma were doing. It's not right, and it's not funny, not unless Trunks is the as same age as Gohan. Vegeta and Bulma can be wild with their sex life if they wanted to, but they should be cautious for their child's sake. It's not decent for a son to know stuff like that at a young age. It feels so wrong. |
Protos Heis chapter 24 . 3/11/2022 When Goku started being emotional about not being able to help with the situation, I was dreading I would hate every bit of it. As expected of Piccolo, his response was sensible. That was amazing of you to write that part! I was impressed! Also, when Bulma talked about the things she remembered, it's almost as if she remembered everything. I was even certain she would burst out and said "in other words, I got my memories back!" xD LOL I wish that happened. I could never get tired of Vegeta and Bulma's smut scenes, even though yours weren't detailed. |
Protos Heis chapter 23 . 3/11/2022 I actually expected that she will not gain her memories anymore, but now, it seems she will slowly gain them back. I hope they will all come back. How will they suppose to make love in there like that? Gohan is in the house! Damn! |
Protos Heis chapter 22 . 3/11/2022 Thank you for making Yamcha just the way I always believe he was. He is such a good man. Even in canon, he accepted what became with him and Bulma, and he's even the one who told Future Trunks that Vegeta was livid when Cell killed him. Also at the last sentence...WTF? Hahaha! |
Protos Heis chapter 21 . 3/11/2022 Oh, please! Don't tell me Bulma would only be interested in Vegeta because she heard he's good in bed? That would be hilarious. lol Damn! 5 chapters left and still no improvement for my favorite couple. I'm so eager for their story already. Waaah... |
Protos Heis chapter 20 . 3/11/2022 My least favorite chapter, but I'm not complaining. There is always like that in a fiction. I hope the next one would be interesting again! |
Protos Heis chapter 19 . 3/11/2022 Surely Piccolo knows! Oh, please there should be someone to save him. My poor Vegeta! There are only 7 chapters left and still barely any progress between VegeBul. I'm getting worried about how this will turn out! |
Protos Heis chapter 18 . 3/10/2022 Bulma didn't want this any more than Vegeta do, may this serve as a lesson to her. Damn! And here I thought they will start rebuilding their family again. That was an intense moment right there! It was so unexpected and I was shocked that Trunks went Super Saiyan 2 because of it. Great chapter! |
Protos Heis chapter 17 . 3/10/2022 Well done Vegeta! That was a clever move. Bulma may not have her memories yet but you could get to live with her again! The way they spoke with each other in this chapter it's as if the accident didn't happen. You grasped their characters well! |
Protos Heis chapter 16 . 3/10/2022 The possible reason why Bulma felt worried was she was feeling touched by the sight of Vegeta carrying his son, or that she was having a familiar feeling of "love" atm. I hope I'm right. |
Protos Heis chapter 15 . 3/10/2022 It's 3:41 a.m. here already and I still haven't finished the story. Damn...I want to go to sleep already. I feel tired but I want to read more. Bulma meets Vegeta at last! |
Protos Heis chapter 14 . 3/10/2022 Chi-chi be better to bring Vegeta with them to this party! I can't wait this long. I want Bulma and Vegeta to meet again. I'm getting frustrated waiting. huhuhu... |