Reviews for Empty House |
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Protos Heis chapter 13 . 3/10/2022 Poor souls! They were too busy getting high and getting laid, and suddenly, the distressed Saiyan decided to just kill them all! He could've sparred with Goku and vented his frustration on him, and that part is training too! Hitting two birds with one stone! |
Protos Heis chapter 12 . 3/10/2022 I was so happy she still doesn't remember! I swear your story is getting better as each chapter goes by! Also, you finally explained Dende's part. I thought you were going to ignore his healing power. That's very clever of you to not miss him out! :D |
Protos Heis chapter 11 . 3/10/2022 Oh, dear! That was a good one! Tears were actually building up in my eyes but I didn't let them fall. That scene with Trunks and Vegeta is a tearjerker. I'm sure a lot of your readers had cried too. Good thing this is already completed when I read this story or I might be so anxious about waiting for the next chapter! |
Protos Heis chapter 10 . 3/10/2022 Did you mean maniacal instead of maniacle? I couldn't find the word in the dictionary, but "maniacal" makes sense. The error is found in the first paragraph of this chapter. After your author's note. Gohan should've reminded Eighteen that she was also a villain in the past, but I guess compared to Vegeta, what she did was almost benign. |
Protos Heis chapter 9 . 3/10/2022 I'm glad to see Piccolo! Thanks for that! I was worried he won't get involved at all in your story. That was so calm of Vegeta. I thought he would go berserk after learning he can't meet Bulma. I look forward to seeing more of his reactions later on, and of course, Trunks' too. |
Protos Heis chapter 8 . 3/10/2022 Too bad Krillin didn't have Eighteen's picture. I'd like to know what Bulma thinks of her looks. |
Protos Heis chapter 7 . 3/9/2022 Oh, I can't wait to see Vegeta wake up and know how he's going to take this! The crying Gohan is too much for me. I would have understood if it was a younger one. It doesn't feel like him. As for Yamcha, it was inevitable for him to be happy about the situation. He loved Bulma after all, but I'm glad Eighteen was there to make him realize how selfish he was. |
Protos Heis chapter 6 . 3/9/2022 This doesn't sound like Goku at all...AT ALL! I would've understood if it was Yamcha who was yelling at her. Blaming her for what happened to her. I always thought in a way, Goku is calm. It's hard to picture him like this. Also, wouldn't it saves them all the trouble if they ask Dende to heal her? Bulma may not be able to swallow Senzu bean but surely Dende could heal her! |
Protos Heis chapter 5 . 3/8/2022 My poor Vegeta! Probably didn't get much sleep. I hope Yamcha goes with Goku to visit Bulma. It would only be fair for him. The man still hasn't got over her, and after all, they've been together for quite a long time until Vegeta came. |
Protos Heis chapter 4 . 3/8/2022 Why does Vegeta still have to call her "woman." They're already married after Buu saga, are they not? I like how relevant Gohan is in this story. |
Protos Heis chapter 3 . 3/8/2022 Poor Yamcha! I would've expected for him to be there at the hospital as soon as he had heard but he probably doesn't want to see Bulma in that state. I'm surprised that Tien was also concerned. |
Protos Heis chapter 2 . 3/7/2022 After Buu saga, we all know by then that Shenron could grant a total of 3 wishes. It was back in the day that Dende became the Earth's Kami. So if that's the case, they could have another wish for people to forget that Bulma died, There's no need for Gohan to tell the doctor to keep Bulma's condition a secret. It's hard for me to see Goku crying because of the situation. I wish you only made him look miserable and forlorn. I felt like crying was too for his character. |
Protos Heis chapter 1 . 3/7/2022 I hope Bulma didn't lose a limp or got disfigured. I love the scene where Vegeta, Trunks, and Goku's family were training! It would be even more marvelous if Piccolo were there. I can't wait to know what will happen next. |
Guest chapter 26 . 3/10/2021 This was a fantastic take on a real human drama but molded to fit the dragon ball world. The work was excellently ridden and had some really gut wrenching moments that I didn’t expect like the huge fight between Bulma and Vegeta that forced Trunks’s accession due to the stress. That’s a great concept that many people underutilize when dealing when super sayian transformations in my opinion; anger isn’t the only way to ascend. It’s also through extreme moments of uncomfortableness or other strong emotions. |
kyrarihanna chapter 23 . 7/1/2019 I wish I'm as lucky as Gohan to get the first class seat to listen the story about how bulma and Vegeta got together..hehe..it will forever be a mystery in dbz history.. |