Reviews for Empty House |
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botanbutton chapter 7 . 12/18/2008 Aw man! This is totally unexpected and messed up! And I'm enjoying every paragraph! Please keep up the good work! _ |
Amy chapter 7 . 12/18/2008 Yamcha was great the Jealousy wuss but sweet guy, Its nice to read him in character. Can't wait for Vegeta reaction. |
Wayward Saiyan chapter 7 . 12/17/2008 Definitely one of the best fics I've read in a while! Eighteen was hilarious. I like the way the story is going, I feel sort of bad wanting to see Vegeta's reaction, makes it seem like I enjoy suffering lol. |
jdeppgirl4 chapter 7 . 12/17/2008 Oh good God, this isn't going to go well at all, is it? AH! Can't wait for more! |
LuvleeCookie chapter 7 . 12/17/2008 I love this fiC!first, I thought that you were going to kill off Bulma , but you let her live and made it take a very unexpected twist. I can't wait for chapter 8. On the lighter side, I LOVE eighteen in this fic. She really totalled Yamcha. Bulma got together with Vegeta out of boredom? or a revenge lay? LOL, this s**t is fantastic! |
Chii chapter 7 . 12/17/2008 Well, I hope you're happy...you've broken my heart... ;) Poor Vegeta and Trunks! I hope things can be resolved quickly! Can't wait for the next installment! |
Elisabpshady chapter 7 . 12/17/2008 OMG! That was great! When the doctor said she has amnesia I could only think about Vegeta and Trunks! I can see that yamcha will try to make a move on her... stupid yamcha Oh My... i cant wait to see vegeta1s reaction! Thanks for updade |
Piccolo is green chapter 7 . 12/17/2008 :O That was a curve ball! I really wasn't expacting that, that's so cool! (sad, but it'l make a great story). I can't wait to see how Vegeta reacts, I feel really sorry for him. |
Frankokomando chapter 7 . 12/17/2008 I think this chapter is fine the way it is :D Hope you update soon! :D |
ProjectSynapse chapter 7 . 12/17/2008 Awesome chapter, and I don't think you should have cut it. It's definitely perfect :). I really can't wait to read the next one - you have me addicted to this story! One thing, though: "The four friends just quietly backed out of the room, fighting to tear their eyes away from their friend’s spasming from of their friend." I know, it's just a typo, just thought I would bring it to your attention. Thanks for writing this excellent story. You really have talent, and I hope you know that! |
XxKuroyoxX chapter 7 . 12/17/2008 NO YOUR EVIL how could she forget VEGETA! And TRUNKS! stupid yamcha, trying to pry them apart, man your story is evil, I CAN'T BELIEVE SHE FORGOT THEM...well i guess thats the fun in being an author, you can make them do anything -.- Gr, anyway update soon |
Aneriangel chapter 6 . 12/16/2008 I can't tell you what I said when I reached the end of the chapter and realized there was no more story, because I might get my account frozen. But ARG! Update! Update! Update! I've gotten in too deep. I'm in over my head! The sky is closing around me! |
hopelesslydemented chapter 1 . 12/15/2008 Wah, cliffhanger! Where's Vegeta? She can't wake up without Vegeta there! Please don't kill her off, the Z gang won't be the same without her and worse, Vegeta will probably go kaboom! |
skippay chapter 6 . 12/15/2008 ah im so excited lol really cant wait for the next chapter I LOVE THIS STORY |
XxKuroyoxX chapter 6 . 12/14/2008 :O DAMN, she better be waking up, or so god help me... OH NO, Vegeta is gonna be asleep when she wakes up, o all hell is gonna pay if he isn't there |