Reviews for Empty House
Fujiko Kuwabara chapter 5 . 12/11/2008
I can't believe that I haven't reviewed this yet! Seriously, this is getting really good. I can't wait to read what happens next. Great job.
hopelesslydemented chapter 4 . 12/9/2008
This is a really poignant story and it looks very promising as a drama fic. Do you plan on really killing Bulma so you can explore Vegeta's psyche when the person he values the most in the world dies? Hm, interesting since she won't be able to be revived by the dragonballs after dying from natural causes...
kikyohater920alltheway chapter 4 . 12/9/2008
Really good chapter. Vegeta was portraid amazingly. Thanks for the update and update as soon as you can!
Wayward Saiyan chapter 4 . 12/9/2008
Your characterization is spot on! It is so refreshing to see a deeper side to all of the characters. Keep up the great work, I can't wait to read more.
royalblue chapter 4 . 12/8/2008
great story, keep up the good work!
skippay chapter 4 . 12/7/2008
good chapter i liked the raw emotion...you update pretty fast thats really awesome you should keep up with that lol )
DEWarrior chapter 4 . 12/7/2008
I love this story! Please update!
Chii chapter 4 . 12/7/2008
*sob*

The situation is awful...

The story is amazing!

Hoping for a quick update!
Frankokomando chapter 4 . 12/7/2008
D: I hope Bulma's okay.

Can't wait for the next chapter! :D
fdsfddsfds chapter 4 . 12/7/2008
great story! i want them to use the dragonballs to wish her back to health, or a senzu bean! so sad
Metal-Man chapter 4 . 12/7/2008
Great story so far, your characterisation is spot on and your descriptive skills do wonders as well.

I just wonder when they'll finally have an epiphany and haul Dende's arse to that hospital. (If ever ;)
Elisabpshady chapter 4 . 12/7/2008
Oh.. so dramatic! I love it...

poor vegeta... i hate to see him like this..

hope you updade soon...
animebdoll chapter 4 . 12/7/2008
i need more so give me more
Amy chapter 4 . 12/7/2008
This story is amazing it shocked me to find a story that truly define the characters. Most of the time people portray Goku as having no brain cells, and Bulma as a bit h. Having other characters thoughts and feelings just makes this story more deeper. You write emotion really well I can really feel vegeta pain.
XxKuroyoxX chapter 4 . 12/6/2008
Poor Vegeta

Update soon

i really want to know how she is gonna pull through this
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