O... Lots of drama! I like it!

Especially, I like the ending of this chapter; I didn't think of the fact that she'd have to stay dead if it leaked :/

Vegeta's characterisation is great, really :)

I picked up on a minor typing error nearish the beginning - "he reached out with his other for his other for his youngest child" - just a bit of repeated vocabulary there.

A story with high potential and I want to know what happens next!

Please another chapter soon, this story is really good already. Bulma can't stay dead, never! P _;

AARRGH! I CAN'T BELIEVE YOU STOPPED THERE! ;)

This story is amazing! I actually have tears in my eyes. I like how you cut between how everyone is handling the situation, rather than just focusing on the biggest impacts (Vegeta and Trunks). It's heartbreaking to see even Goku feeling so helpless.

I really hope that Bulma is going to be alright, and I REALLY hope for a new chapter (or a few, even) soon!

OMFG!

How are you gonna keep Bulma alive? I can't wait for the next chapter!

GREAT story.

REALMENTE ME ENCANTO!ESPERO QUE ACTUALICES PRONTO BESOS

oh the suspence! oh the horror! oh vegeta's so cute... update soon please, I'm curious to see where you're going with this.

:O OMG, you have to update FAST

WHAT IS GONNA HAPPEN

UPDATE, soon

Wow, that was really instense and very exciting. Please update soon, I want to know what happens next!

Please another chapter! I'm already hooked. You've done a very good job in drawing me in with just one chapter! Poor Bulma, oh no. (

Wow. A very strong and powerful story you have here, both in the style and in the content. Your descriptions are spot on and I think the plot development so far is great. Character-wise, I think you have them all down to a tee. You should be very proud of yourself for this one and I hope to see it continued!