|Reviews for The Potions Master's Storeroom|
| Tandy chapter 4 . 11/30/2008
| makaem chapter 4 . 11/30/2008
So is he going to be slow and patient this entire story? Or will you let everything build up and then let them have their lemony moment? Excellent chapter.
| demeterschild chapter 4 . 11/30/2008
Wow! I'm loving this so far. I noticed two errors in the four chapters I've read so far, but they were incredibly minor and I'm a nitpicker.
Your images are great and you've done an excellent job at keeping them in character while allowing us to see a different side of them. It's also very funny! I was truly disgusted at the image of Umbridge in tassels. Dear Merlin. Can't wait to read more! Update much and often!
| xineweber chapter 4 . 11/29/2008
"... a pile of socially-unacceptable goo." LOL :D This is my favorite chapter so far. It's so light and fluffy but quivering with anticipation and interspersed with humor. Always a joy to read your stories :) Thank you!
| notwritten chapter 4 . 11/29/2008
I think this is a interesting chapter, and I like it. Keep smiling. :-)
| Hebe GB chapter 4 . 11/29/2008
Dolores Umbridge in nipple tassles - LOL - classic!
| loveismagic chapter 4 . 11/29/2008
how sweet. i really like this chapter.
| ReaderinthePNW chapter 4 . 11/29/2008
I love it! I love this Severus! Can't wait for more! (There is more, right?) *Big pleading blue eyes* Also excited for more of the Draco story. Glad you've updated, I've missed these!
| debjunk chapter 4 . 11/29/2008
Ahh, deliciously, delightful fluff. I loved Minerva's shock. Heh, heh.
I just love these two together. Severus wasn't afraid to tell her how he felt, and that's good. Her forwardness helped him to be truthful.
And I loved that they can still insult and tease each other. It makes the whole thing seem more real.
| tambrathegreat chapter 4 . 11/29/2008
Umbridge in nipple tassels? I need to go wash my brain to get that particularly nasty image out of it. That was a great line by the way, just wrong and disturbing on so many levels.
I like your tentative Severus. It's kind of how I picture him with a woman.
Lovely chapter. I enjoyed McGonagall's reaction to the hand holding, and Hermione's attempt to seduce being turned on her.
| ScatteredVisionShatteredDreams chapter 3 . 11/29/2008
LOVE IT! Please tell me there is more?
| ForbiddenSnowflake16 chapter 3 . 11/28/2008
I love it. You've such a lovely way with words!
The fact that Hermione always gives away what she thinks is amusing.
& I like it when Severus is teasing her.
So I really enjoy reading this! :D
| rinny08 chapter 3 . 11/27/2008
definitely a love it situation.
i'm always up for fluff.
looking forward to the next chapter.
| Megan Consoer chapter 3 . 11/25/2008
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
| Lenora chapter 3 . 11/25/2008
This is so sweet and I can't wait for the next chapter!