Reviews for Suns of Death and Darkness
lyingangel chapter 1 . 6/30/2017
This is a nice story and all but you really need to work on your pacing. It is far too fast. I can't elaborate, since I'm on a phone, but try reading your story like a reader, hmm?
dmalfoy1973 chapter 56 . 6/30/2017
One of the best stories I have read on here
Ronelia Delgrange chapter 40 . 6/19/2017
Your page breaks are hilarious. :))
Ronelia Delgrange chapter 9 . 6/17/2017
Try; élixir de plaisir de jeunesse
Ronelia Delgrange chapter 8 . 6/17/2017
It makes more sense to say; des larmes de rayon de lune
mike.holmes.94 chapter 1 . 5/24/2017
this is my favourite fanfic story and i think it always will be
wildtrance chapter 2 . 5/12/2017
Is no one going to question the transformation? Or anything else? ... explanations would be great!
I'm very confused.
tecachan chapter 3 . 4/14/2017
ok answered 8D
tecachan chapter 2 . 4/14/2017
Man what's up with all the Greek? o.õ
DrarrySxRLover chapter 27 . 3/14/2017
I died at the white suit
Mike.Delphi chapter 8 . 3/6/2017
French translation: Larmes de la lumière de la lune.
Mike.Delphi chapter 2 . 3/6/2017
Okay. I'm guessing the new language is Greek (or at least it sounds so). But when did Tobias get the chance to learn it, much less start using it? This is not a critique, just an interrogative. Good story so far.
Divu101 chapter 56 . 2/4/2017
Oh Merlin.. I don't have words. This is the I think 5th time I'm reading this story. It has made me laugh, cry, terrify my parents and go through a whirl of emotions... I absolutely love it! Thank you so much! By far one If not THE best Drarry(My OTP! Squeeeee!) fan fictions I have ever read
AliceShinAkira chapter 56 . 1/31/2017
I'm not sure why, but I would always cry at the epilogue. Otherwise a great story.
staar chapter 56 . 1/15/2017
loved this !
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