|Reviews for What could've been|
| XxSilverXTearsxX chapter 13 . 12/28/2013
I know its been a few years but I love this story and I hope you update soon
| BlazeStryker chapter 13 . 6/24/2013
This was what Hiashi wanted, I despise him, and while I can barely believe that anyone would write him as being so callous that he'd very possibly get his own daughter killed just to remove an inconvenient ninja, I have to say you wrote it well.
| BlazeStryker chapter 8 . 6/24/2013
Gregory House, ninja doctor.. just without the Vicodin!
| osanna1234 chapter 13 . 9/5/2012
Hope the next chapter is soon
| ranneal chapter 8 . 9/2/2012
Actually, a very interesting chapter eventhough it contained lots of info and no fighting. Great writing.
| ranneal chapter 7 . 9/2/2012
Another great battle chapter...great job with showing Naruto defending his friends. I'm enjoying the story a lot.
| ranneal chapter 6 . 9/2/2012
Another excellent and fun chapter to read. A lot of great moments between Naruto and Hinata. I wonder what Hinata senses...and is watching them? Cool ending.
| ranneal chapter 5 . 9/2/2012
Shopping?...well it turned out to be a great chapter...I loved it.
| ranneal chapter 4 . 9/2/2012
What a great chapter...kind of a tear jerker at least for this guy...when Naruto gives the scrolls to his teammates and then they refuse them...for his sake. That was a super moment in the story:)
| ranneal chapter 3 . 9/1/2012
Very good action within the test...good cliffhanger ending too. This is a cool test for the team. Super chapter.
| ranneal chapter 2 . 9/1/2012
Great second chapter. I think that the team is set up well and they understand each other and can function. Team 7 in the manga was so different with the constant problems with each other. I like what you have done with the story and will read on.
| ranneal chapter 1 . 9/1/2012
I loved the chapter...the idea of putting Naruto on team 8 was well thought out and I liked the reasoning of the Third Hokage. Great job with the intros too. I am going to read on:)
| PhoenixRe chapter 1 . 2/23/2012
Haven't really got an opinion yet since I just started reading it but I would like to point out that it would probably be better to have Naruto from the get go to be in team 8 and have the Hokage and Iruka discuss something else than give that particular excuse for the change. I understand that you want to write a story where Naruto is in team 8 instead; nothing wrong with that. But if you will use an excuse for the change rather than have it be like that from the start you should probably make a more sound excuse. The you wrote it just seemed that you needed the change but couldn't think of a decent justification through the particular event and just tumbled around with words. I think that even giving the event as a reason but not explaining the justification would be better rather than a lukewarm excuse.
Just my personal opinion, I trust I that I didn't come off as too strong. My only purpose was to give my opinion for better writing...
| Slytherin's Pimp chapter 13 . 10/31/2011
Please update. I want to know what is going to happen.
| RisingMist chapter 13 . 10/24/2011
After this chapter, I think your story should be reclassified and put in the drama category. Angsty much? I hope you are able to improve your writing skills and gather many happy readers.