|Reviews for Jonathan Stone and the Secret of the Centaurs|
| Korvi Krow chapter 4 . 7/22/2009
Hm...maybe Professor Gentling should have served them cinnamon tea with rosehips and ruybos? That's some pretty good stuff. :p
| naru894 chapter 1 . 3/20/2009
thanks for the chp, it seems it will turn to be a cute story, im really looking foward to read it :D, i loved the end of the chapter
| Korvi Krow chapter 3 . 1/9/2009
A. Ma. Zing.
I am really looking forward to more of this fanfic!
There were also a few things I really liked in particular. Such as the "Barbie-Doll Blondie." Heh.
'tropical star shaped things"
! For some odd reason, I'm thinking Paopu fruit...
| Korvi Krow chapter 2 . 1/9/2009
Noice. That is one sassy hat. :/ LOL
Only one suggestion: I would refrain from adding author's notes in the middle of the chapters. Save them for before and after the chapters are posted. I know firsthand that doing otherwise tends to make the writer seems less experienced.
Otherwise I am deeply enjoying this story. :p Wonder what the deal is with Aria...you've got me curious, my friend!
| Korvi Krow chapter 1 . 1/9/2009
Awh! Fluff! 0 How sweet!
...um, right. *clears throat* The chapter itself was really good, even the parts that didn't include...fluff... *still trying not to laugh from over-indulgence*. I am SO gonna read the next two chapters! p