Reviews for A Forbidden Forever
wantonlytoread chapter 18 . 10/11/2015
Okay, I've done it again for wrapped up in a story that is incomplete and has been for a number of years. Life is full of disappointments...
Thanks for 18 chapters, enjoyed what I read.
jk chapter 18 . 9/14/2015
what that's it? but its not resolved!
jk chapter 16 . 9/14/2015
why is it that we are at the end of chapter 16 and we still don't have his history? I need to know if he was married while human? and since he was already sexually active why didn't he hook up with rose? was he with Tanya? or the other sisters? these are things we need to know
jk chapter 15 . 9/14/2015
I hope rose fucking tries it and get her ass handed to her, ive never like rose
jk chapter 8 . 9/14/2015
2 whole chapters about how weak bella is...seeing the prosecuting attorney or whoever shouldn't send bella into the deep end ...shouldn't make her embarrass herself in front of all those people and her new boss. for fucks sake! she already fucking fainted because shes too pussy to speak up and say alice lets stop and eat something...I mean really? why in the fuck wouldn't she do that? and whats the point of having her so stupid and weak? shes more trouble then shes worth in my opinion. your ruining your story trying to make bella as fragile as possible...she was in and out of foster homes for years she should be tougher then this and this is from someone with experience! I had that life she should be a lot stronger then this and she should be able to handle this no problem...seeing that prick should have just pissed her off nothing more nothing less. you've taken this bullshit to far and now I cant your main character...good job
jk chapter 7 . 9/14/2015
are you fucking kidding me? she got beat up and almost raped but she lived to see another day! why would she just break down like that? who does that? seriously? and its been years and she wasn't even raped so why hasn't she dealt with that shit? its not like she was taken and beat and starved and tortured...get the fuck over it bad shit happens then we continue on...change adapt deal with your shit the break downs are just fucking embarrassing
jk chapter 5 . 9/14/2015
whats with bellas awe and wonder? its just down right embarrassing for her. As far as she knows shes only there to ward off some skank she doesn't know Edward and as far as she knows he could be the biggest whore in history...just sayin he is ALOT older then her
jk chapter 4 . 9/14/2015
if shes working 3 jobs then she obviously needs the money I assume to pay for was so fucking rude of them to ask her knowing she was supposed to work that day. That's money she wont be making, she'll actually be paying to go with him. cause that's like $100 bucks she wont make.
I always hate alice is a huge fucking meddler stories and this is one of the worst...not the worst but pretty damn close. Alice needs to go the fuck away and let Edward be a big boy. What is the point of having him be 28 if he cant act like it?
I assume he had a wife before he was turned, what happened to her? it would be strange in the time he lived if he didn't!
jk chapter 1 . 9/14/2015
so the only difference is that Edward was turned when he was 28, he doesn't have his card and he has a job instead of going to school? I think hes less appealing now. good job I think ill write a story using the twilight characters except is will be shorter and it will suck... good plan!
KatherineKatrinaBloomSalvatore chapter 15 . 8/8/2015
i kind of hope Rosalie dies
mona chapter 18 . 9/8/2014
love you'r next chapter
chossa chapter 18 . 8/13/2014
I like your story
erika shoval chapter 1 . 6/16/2014
Absolutely love the first chapter! Can't wait for more.
inu16kags chapter 18 . 6/15/2014
Love it! Please update soon
Guest chapter 18 . 6/15/2014
Please update soon
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