|Reviews for Decode|
| Leanna de Weisdorn chapter 2 . 12/1/2008
I give you a big cake, just give me the next chapter! :-))
It get's exaiting!
| Stephycats7785 chapter 2 . 11/30/2008
Wow that was really really cool. I cant wait for more so please update.
| love is forever chapter 1 . 11/30/2008
| i heart tom chapter 1 . 11/28/2008
| happy go lucky chapter 1 . 11/28/2008
| nancy chapter 1 . 11/28/2008
awesome upload soon!
| kay chapter 1 . 11/26/2008
| naamee chapter 1 . 11/26/2008
hurry love it:)
| sam chapter 1 . 11/26/2008
| Stephycats7785 chapter 1 . 11/16/2008
Wow I cant wait to read more, but unlike Salazar and Rowena I hope TOm and Hermione have a happy ending
| Serpent In Red chapter 1 . 11/16/2008
Hope you don't mind me pointing out an error (I'm a prude when it comes to spelling...X.x...). Hope you don't mind :twists hands nervously:
He can’t leave Hogwarts? - since you're using past tense throughout the story, "can't" perhaps should be "couldn't"?
“Rowena, you must listen to me.” He stated letting go of her.- Perhaps the period after "me" should be a comma and the "He" lowercased...unless you just want to change the second sentence to "He released her." or something like that...
...of the Muggle-borns.” She muttered. - the period after "Muggle-borns" should be a comma and "She" lowercased.
we haven't been seperated since the time we first met." - "seperated" should be "separated"
be apart, Rowena.” He muttered - the period after "Rowena" should be a comma and the "He" lowercased.
begging you.” She pleaded - the period after "you" should be a comma and there should be a period after "pleaded".
know I must.” He muttered. - the period after "must" should be a comma and "He" should be lowercased.
Everything feel heightened. - "feel" should be "felt"
Salazar was left her and now she is alone again. - "was" should be "had" and "is" should be "was"
Hopefully, you don't mind that I've pointed out the errors. Perhaps I might suggest finding a beta or simply reading over the chapters a couple of more times? I would recommend finding a beta because sometimes, it's easier for others to detect errors and sometimes, what makes sense to us, might not make sense to others.
I mean, don't get me wrong; I'm very interested in reading more! The concept, thus far, seems quite new and I'm anticipating how you would make Tom and Hermione meet.
| Charlotte chapter 1 . 11/16/2008
I like the begining! :)
so update soon! :D
| Bewitched Nightwalker chapter 1 . 11/16/2008
wicked awesome! cant wait for you to update!
| RadicalReason chapter 1 . 11/16/2008
I love the phrase "the cloud of guilt that rained over him."
Lovely writing so far. It'll be fun to see what this fic turns into.
| Madame Dee chapter 1 . 11/16/2008
Great start! I'm really interested to see where you go from here! :)