|Reviews for It Just Happened!|
| MagentaEmeraldTangerineEbony chapter 1 . 1/31/2009
oh this is exciting!
I didn't really get the relevance of Margaret and Roger's conversation at the end but the rest was great, I really want to know what happens next!
| PouncerPrincess chapter 1 . 11/18/2008
This is a good start
You've done very well
It was a little confusing at times
for instance when you wrote (her father was divorced)it could have meant Rebecca's father was divorced while I think you meant Anna's.
Also when you were describing the dream of Margaret's it needed to be a little clearer that she was sleeping.
However you have wrote good descriptions, like when Margaret was getting ready to go out.
You might need to develop the characters more but I am sure you will do that in more chapters
Maybe they could have been more concerned that their daughter was mising but it is a good start
It may have been a little too long but I will keep reading
I hope this review helps your doing a great job!