Reviews for Secret Desires and Nameless Fears
evi ive chapter 12 . 7/23/2014
great story. i thought lorelai was a little rough on luke at the party.
did you do a sequel to this story?
evi ive chapter 7 . 7/23/2014
on the stairs!? luke!? wow!
evi ive chapter 5 . 7/23/2014
great version to the story
Didine34790 chapter 12 . 2/26/2011
this is a wonderful, beautiful, amazing story !
Sutton07 chapter 10 . 7/17/2009
I think Lorelai was a little touchy about the Gilmore's wanting to buy them a house for a wedding present. I guess it's the hormones acting up but Lorelai needs to try and keep them under control other wise Emily will guess that she's pregnant and not married again. Lorelai telling Rory and Rory excited that she's going to be a big sister is perfect. Lorelai telling Rory meet mini-Luke-to-be and Luke answering very grumpy I might add "Not going to happen" again perfect. Good read...
Sutton07 chapter 9 . 7/16/2009
Emily planning a engagement party for Luke and Lorelai inviting some of the Stars Hollow residents this is going to be really funny. He's there for her and he always will be. Going along with the party will help Luke get to know the Gilmore's better and see maybe what Lorelai goes through. Luke thinks the baby will be a girl I hope it's a boy.
Sutton07 chapter 8 . 7/16/2009
A very enjoyable chapter. Loved Lorelai being Lorelai. When Emily asked her about what did Sookie have and Lorelai's response was "A Baby" "I know she had a baby, Lorelai, but what kind was it." "An elephant." "Lorelai." "She had a girl, Mom. They named her Martha." Lorelai asking Luke "What about me?" "You're a pain in the butt" Luke teased "That's what makes me so charming" "Charming isn't quite the adjective I would use." "Beautiful? Adorable? Irresistible? "Crazy" is the word I'd use. The bantering back and forth is perfect. Another good chapter...
Sutton07 chapter 7 . 7/16/2009
Lorelai finding out she is pregnant with Luke at her side hearing it the same time she hears it was perfect. Excited about having a baby they are both taken over by their lust for each other decide to have sex behind the curtain what are they thinking of. Finally reaching Luke's apartment they are going for round two unbelievable. Good read...
Sutton07 chapter 6 . 7/16/2009
This was a common sense episode that should have happened instead of what we got. Rory sad about not only what Mitchum said to here but what happened with Logan. Good read...
Sutton07 chapter 5 . 7/16/2009
I would have loved to see that scene Luke writing on Lorelai's food the words "Will you marry me." Luke didn't think she saw it but her answer was YES written out in fries. Loved this chapter because he proposed and she accepted perfect...
Sutton07 chapter 4 . 7/15/2009
WOW you don't have Rory stealing a boat, getting arrested and going to jail good chapter already. Rory going back to Yale to her room only to have Paris asking her what's up. Paris got Rory to tell her what Mitchum said and then telling Rory that it took guts telling him off was exactly what Rory needed to her. Perfect thanks for that...Paris telling Rory she has gotten very wimpy lately and it's about time she was beginning to come back being the Rory she knew from Chilton. She was a tough, determined, hard worker and a smart young lady. I never could figure out why the writers took Rory's character and made her someone who didn't have the push she did when she was at Chilton. Miss Patty sees Luke in a towel another scene I would have loved to see in the series. Rory not dropping out of Yale another common sense decision coming from Rory. Good read next chapter...
Sutton07 chapter 3 . 7/15/2009
I just loved the way Mitchum told Rory (being sarcastic here) "And I have to tell you. You don't got it." GOT He's a man who is in the newspaper business and he uses the word GOT in the comment he makes to Rory...Always thought that was a poorly written comment coming for a highly educated man? You have written Rory answering him back finally Rory with a backbone. "Hooray" Funny Kirk putting Luke's clothes on that's new. Luke didn't take his clothes because Kirk has them on and now when he leaves with only a towel would have loved to see that scene...Good read...
Sutton07 chapter 2 . 7/15/2009
Like your take better then the one we got on the series. She is going to find out right there at the hospital if she's pregnant or not. She's right Luke should be there. Next chapter can't wait to read it...
Sutton07 chapter 1 . 7/15/2009
I loved that scene when they were in the limo and when they got back to his apartment. Lorelai realizing that she hadn't taken her pills and they didn't think about protection because they were so drunk. I'm glad to read you have Lorelai telling Luke about not taking her birth control pills and she is worried that they were careless...Luke needed to say something right away because it's going to make Lorelai think that he's either mad about her maybe being pregnant or he doesn't want to have a jam hands kid. Curious to read next chapter...
lilienprinzessin chapter 4 . 5/29/2009
I like your Rory - and your whole take on the eps - much better than what we saw on TV. Waiting for the E/R appearance now.
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