Reviews for You DO love me?
Guest chapter 1 . 10/3/2015
I liked your story. The only problem was is this. I have watched avatar 56 times over and over again. Toph is blind, and my only complaint, is that she 'looked' do and saw his erection. Toph is blind so she won't be able to see it. Unless she used her hands or feet. But, the rest of the story was pretty good so good job!
toph beifong chapter 1 . 4/22/2015
And that was how Lin was born
SHAWN WALLS chapter 1 . 12/22/2014
you should make a sequel
anonymous chapter 1 . 12/2/2014
MessYourself chapter 1 . 11/26/2014
omg it would be funny if you posted a 2nd chapter of them getting in trouble. LOL
KoiFishiInMyEye chapter 1 . 10/9/2014
Wow , dude , this was really intense. NOthing else to say.
no name chapter 1 . 8/20/2014
not the best...
shuceyb chapter 1 . 8/1/2014
could do with some sexual improvement but quite good if you ask me
christafer chapter 1 . 8/2/2014
i enjoyed it though a bit of a cliff hanger i wanted to see how katara expressed her feelings toward this indiscretion and how sokka was cooping with it
but none the less really well written thank u for the fun read
Morgan chapter 1 . 5/24/2014
That was a pretty cool story!
kya chapter 1 . 5/4/2014
does toph get pregnet?
ProtoMan245 chapter 1 . 4/20/2014
Holy mother of cake! This is one of the best Avatar fanfiction I read. Manly because of grammar, no errors on that topic On another note, I still love it!
Guest chapter 1 . 3/7/2014
These are great
keta strife chapter 1 . 12/14/2013
the last part was a lol moment and u should have made kitaraa jealous
Guest chapter 1 . 12/1/2013
Really really good I though. Keep Doing it. Amazing !
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