|Reviews for Beware of Goblin Gifts|
| LoreLorelei chapter 1 . 10/31
pampampampampampamPAM pampamPAM pampamPAM ... love Edvard Grieg.
| LoreLorelei chapter 15 . 10/31
I want to kill Toby. He doesn't deserve either Sarah or Jareth or his parents.
| Kikita chapter 27 . 6/27
| lykiana chapter 1 . 1/19
Ooooh, very intriguing start, consider me hooked!
| SaiyaCat chapter 10 . 10/13/2016
| hearagain chapter 27 . 8/8/2016
Lovely story and this chapter made me laugh. Thanks for the ride and for sharing your story with us.
| Sulador chapter 9 . 7/16/2015
I really don't like that little bastard Toby in this story, with his "the Witch" this and his "Father" that. Yeah, I know he was lied to, but still. I think I'm done here.
| Lady Knight of VT chapter 27 . 7/17/2015
I always love your personal encounters with our favorite King! This one especially, as it references my favorite pirate Captain (Sparrow, of course!). It was rather interesting seeing Toby painted the way you made him, and I have to say that while I'd like to throttle him, it made for a refreshing read. Can't wait to start on the next fic about dear old tall blond and goblin! D
P.S. You know, if you ever want to do a Jack Sparrow theme...I would definitely push and leap frog folks to be the first in line to read it!
| loverofanime41302 chapter 24 . 6/6/2015
hahahaha PRINCESS BRIDE REFERENCE! "You miserable, vomitous mass!"
hehe TO THE PAIN, REBELLIOUS MOUNTAIN GOBLIN!
sorry... I think I'll just... go to bed now. ;D
| Guest chapter 27 . 4/10/2015
It was brilliant.
:3 well done.
| LovelyAmberLight chapter 27 . 9/29/2014
Great story, and loved the scribe/Jerath bantering afterward.
| Tamha chapter 27 . 9/14/2014
Very well done. Probably the first story I've read with a Dark!Toby focus.
| Guest chapter 5 . 12/2/2013
Witch needn't be capitalized, as it is not a proper noun.
Breech breach (Breech is for birth and tight pants, while breach is what you do to a wall etc. to get through it).
Broach brooch (you broach a subject, but the pin you wear is a brooch).
| Guest chapter 4 . 12/2/2013
Lots and lots of typos. A beta reader would fix this up for you.
| Lozzarooni chapter 27 . 7/19/2013
I join the general consensus and agree that Toby was an absolute little sod, but then that's teenage boys for you - or boys in general - they're awful, I should know I had two brothers. Interesting storyline having him brainwashed by goblins from an early age although I did feel that his change back from the dark side was a bit quick - I'd have liked to have seen him get his arse kicked by Hoggle before he realised the error of his ways - but alas such is life. Another favourite to add to my list.