|Reviews for Beware of Goblin Gifts|
| Guest chapter 5 . 12/2/2013
Witch needn't be capitalized, as it is not a proper noun.
Breech breach (Breech is for birth and tight pants, while breach is what you do to a wall etc. to get through it).
Broach brooch (you broach a subject, but the pin you wear is a brooch).
| Guest chapter 4 . 12/2/2013
Lots and lots of typos. A beta reader would fix this up for you.
| Lozzarooni chapter 27 . 7/19/2013
I join the general consensus and agree that Toby was an absolute little sod, but then that's teenage boys for you - or boys in general - they're awful, I should know I had two brothers. Interesting storyline having him brainwashed by goblins from an early age although I did feel that his change back from the dark side was a bit quick - I'd have liked to have seen him get his arse kicked by Hoggle before he realised the error of his ways - but alas such is life. Another favourite to add to my list.
| Honoria Granger chapter 27 . 3/16/2013
I hope that goblin is holding a STEAK to his eye, but as it's a goblin, who knows? This epilogue was quite amusing, especially the refs to Captain! Captain! Jack Sparrow and Captain Nemo...and "Tall, blond and goblin" cracked me up. I just wish you had someone to edit the stories for you...the appalling spelling, grammar and word misuse should really have you Bogged. But they're creative and most entertaining, so I'll keep on reading.
| Honoria Granger chapter 21 . 3/16/2013
Foolhardy, not fool hearty.
| Honoria Granger chapter 20 . 3/16/2013
What a horrible brat this Toby is. I don't think you're going to kill him off, what a pity, but a good bogging might improve him considerably.
| Honoria Granger chapter 17 . 3/16/2013
It's Simon MAGUS, not Magnus...rolls eyes
| Honoria Granger chapter 15 . 3/16/2013
I will refrain from the many, MANY corrections this chapter alone needs, and just indicate one: "He felt the child approach with anger and bête-noir". A bête-noire (correctly spelled) isn't an emotion; it's a thing...something strongly detested, a bugbear. You shouldn't try to use words you don't comprehend...
| Serena M00N chapter 27 . 1/27/2013
I shall have to thank that muse.
| k4renne chapter 27 . 10/20/2012
well i read the whole story and i felt that the charcaters were not constant. also out of character.
| Pig-Rabbit-Suk chapter 27 . 7/7/2011
Oh, I liked this one, yes. Kudos to you.
| booknerdforever chapter 27 . 12/21/2010
lol i loved the ending!
| booknerdforever chapter 15 . 12/21/2010
yay! the kicking of toby in his royal arse!
| booknerdforever chapter 13 . 12/21/2010
Attila the Hun in feminine form? nice!lol
| Dreaming Key chapter 27 . 12/13/2010
You know, I think I have almost read all of your stories. At least the Labyrinth ones. And the more I read, the more I'm inspired. Especially at looking at the DeviantART fan works that have been connected to your stories here and there. I'm half tempted to go back and re-read the Forged Series and let my own artistic muse out and play. Also, sometimes I don't know what I like better. The fantasy rich fan-fictions themselves, or the actual encounters of the King and the Scribe. *_*
With that said, after reading this loose end tie up, I think I may have to detour my Labyrinth fan-fic readings and take a gander at your Captain James Hook story now.
But no matter what, please keep writing! I don't care how long it takes between updates and the like. I really enjoy reading your work, and I've already dove into your newest updates. As long as you keep writing, I can wait. Til your next story and update, blessings to you, Paisley and your muse. _