|Reviews for Beware of Goblin Gifts|
| loverofanime41302 chapter 24 . 6/6
hahahaha PRINCESS BRIDE REFERENCE! "You miserable, vomitous mass!"
hehe TO THE PAIN, REBELLIOUS MOUNTAIN GOBLIN!
sorry... I think I'll just... go to bed now. ;D
| Guest chapter 27 . 4/10
It was brilliant.
:3 well done.
| LovelyAmberLight chapter 27 . 9/29/2014
Great story, and loved the scribe/Jerath bantering afterward.
| Tamha chapter 27 . 9/14/2014
Very well done. Probably the first story I've read with a Dark!Toby focus.
| Guest chapter 5 . 12/2/2013
Witch needn't be capitalized, as it is not a proper noun.
Breech breach (Breech is for birth and tight pants, while breach is what you do to a wall etc. to get through it).
Broach brooch (you broach a subject, but the pin you wear is a brooch).
| Guest chapter 4 . 12/2/2013
Lots and lots of typos. A beta reader would fix this up for you.
| Lozzarooni chapter 27 . 7/19/2013
I join the general consensus and agree that Toby was an absolute little sod, but then that's teenage boys for you - or boys in general - they're awful, I should know I had two brothers. Interesting storyline having him brainwashed by goblins from an early age although I did feel that his change back from the dark side was a bit quick - I'd have liked to have seen him get his arse kicked by Hoggle before he realised the error of his ways - but alas such is life. Another favourite to add to my list.
| Honoria Granger chapter 27 . 3/16/2013
I hope that goblin is holding a STEAK to his eye, but as it's a goblin, who knows? This epilogue was quite amusing, especially the refs to Captain! Captain! Jack Sparrow and Captain Nemo...and "Tall, blond and goblin" cracked me up. I just wish you had someone to edit the stories for you...the appalling spelling, grammar and word misuse should really have you Bogged. But they're creative and most entertaining, so I'll keep on reading.
| Honoria Granger chapter 21 . 3/16/2013
Foolhardy, not fool hearty.
| Honoria Granger chapter 20 . 3/16/2013
What a horrible brat this Toby is. I don't think you're going to kill him off, what a pity, but a good bogging might improve him considerably.
| Honoria Granger chapter 17 . 3/16/2013
It's Simon MAGUS, not Magnus...rolls eyes
| Honoria Granger chapter 15 . 3/16/2013
I will refrain from the many, MANY corrections this chapter alone needs, and just indicate one: "He felt the child approach with anger and bête-noir". A bête-noire (correctly spelled) isn't an emotion; it's a thing...something strongly detested, a bugbear. You shouldn't try to use words you don't comprehend...
| oooOutisooo chapter 27 . 1/27/2013
I shall have to thank that muse.
| k4renne chapter 27 . 10/20/2012
well i read the whole story and i felt that the charcaters were not constant. also out of character.
| Pig-Rabbit-Suk chapter 27 . 7/7/2011
Oh, I liked this one, yes. Kudos to you.