Reviews for Abduction
Guest chapter 8 . 1/12/2015
Doctor who: silence in the library
Motherof8 chapter 9 . 10/24/2014
Yea, keep dreaming eddie
Motherof8 chapter 5 . 10/24/2014
Yup, he's delusional
Motherof8 chapter 4 . 10/24/2014
Yea, right. She's
Motherof8 chapter 1 . 10/24/2014
He's delusional
The Doctor Rose chapter 1 . 2/20/2014
nice
bellaplum chapter 14 . 4/22/2013
a very very nice story
Motherof8 chapter 14 . 4/20/2013
Loved this story
Guest chapter 11 . 4/20/2013
Sorry this story is going to end soon. It is so good
Guest chapter 4 . 4/20/2013
This Edward is a real nutjob
GreenJazzyTwilight1901 chapter 14 . 4/11/2013
Love! :)
GreenJazzyTwilight1901 chapter 1 . 4/10/2013
WOW! Love it! xxx:)
CullenMasenAlways chapter 14 . 2/9/2013
I loved your story! It's so different. I thought that someone else was going to separate Bella from her family... haha anyway, it was great, congratulations!
Skyeward MusicLover chapter 14 . 1/2/2013
Love!
Lost in a magic realm chapter 14 . 8/7/2012
This story was actually really good untill this last chapter, where it suddenly became some what hurried and with out much heart. That made me sad. :'(
It would have been better for this story if you had let it end with chapter 13, eventhough it would be a sad and unhappy ending, but it would make the story so much stronger and more heartfelt.
I'm adding this story to my list of favorites, because of those first 13 chapters. They had a story and a heart within.
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It would benefit this story, if chapter 14 either was removed or divided up into 3 epiloges expanding over time and with a little more filling.
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You can write and tell a story, you just need to think a little more about how to end a good story. That is the only thing you need to practise. :)
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