Reviews for So Close, So Far
Mizackles chapter 1 . 11/26/2008
Oh lads! I think ya did great getting their emotions down x
Onyx Moonbeam chapter 1 . 11/17/2008
And I can't wait until it all goes boom! Nice intensity of emotions.
writergirl94 chapter 1 . 11/17/2008
u tried your best and this really was good. i liked how this took place in season 4. :)
Mad Server chapter 1 . 11/17/2008
This was such an awkward situation for the boys, and I think you did a great job capturing their respective dilemmas. Awesome last line!
darksupernatural chapter 1 . 11/17/2008
You had really good feeling in this one. Great work.
PADavis chapter 1 . 11/17/2008
Season 4 turns out to be a great place to put a combustible drabble. It has felt that way! Good job.

Phoebe
xFaithyx chapter 1 . 11/17/2008
Very nice. I think you got the emotion in there nicely. Angst ridden. Good Job.
FigureInTheAshtray chapter 1 . 11/17/2008
Oh there's plenty of emotion in this and if it's your first drabble, then you've done a great job with it! Those two boys are just way to vulnerable after being apart for four months in their own personal hells. They need to hug more... :D

(I wish!)
Dreadedfemale chapter 1 . 11/16/2008
I think you nailed it!
Enkidu07 chapter 1 . 11/16/2008
Nice job. I think you really captured the tension here. Both with so much needing to be said, but so close to the edge that any wrong words could set them off and drive the wedge even deeper between them. great title too!