Reviews for Kurenai's Affair
Dragoncyber22 chapter 5 . 3/17
A good story, and it has a very good plot. If you make a continuation or continue
the same story will be very cool and that the continuation is very makes you a great fanfic writer, and please continue the story.
Guest chapter 5 . 12/24/2016
update
Brehze chapter 5 . 12/19/2016
Loved the chapter keep up the good work can't wait for the next chapter
Guest chapter 4 . 11/23/2016
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snake1980 chapter 5 . 11/19/2016
been waiting for a update to this story. short but it was still good. looking forward to see what happens in the next and future chapters of this story
Kitsune SaDiablo chapter 1 . 11/15/2016
Spell check is a great tool, but you need to work on your sentence structure. Some have an extra word or are missing a word. Some have the wrong word. I'm sure your beta is good, but the both of you need to go over what you've writthen for cohesion and clarity. Your flow isn't bad, but there's always room for improvement. Names are another factor. Sure it's your fic, but english names don't mix well with Japanese names when your in a world where all the names follow a certain pattern. That's just my opinion though. You also need to work on transition. The scenes are a little choppy. Wether you're new at this or been at this for a while I applaude you for putting this out for others to read. Keep at it and please excuse my attempt at constructive criticism.
omarsaad.elkot chapter 5 . 10/23/2016
That was a good one, if he trust her and she is a good kurama then that will help him, I think
omarsaad.elkot chapter 5 . 10/22/2016
That was a good one, if he trust her and she is a good kurama then that will help him, I think
Melyway chapter 5 . 10/21/2016
I enjoyed this chapter. It's Romantic.
lou2003us chapter 5 . 10/20/2016
I really want to see what happens next!

Looking forward to the next chapter.

Keep up the great work!
Spidey2 chapter 5 . 10/20/2016
AWESOME chapter! Loved it! Keep going! As for Kurama, I say that Naruto should trust her, and that Anko should tell Naruto and Kurenai how she feels about Naruto. I also suggest that Naruto finds a way of releasing Kurama without killing either himself or Kurama, and that Kurama makes him the prince of the Fox clan in Makai.
fresh prince1 chapter 5 . 10/19/2016
seems more like they don't trust him to become strong.
Guest chapter 1 . 10/19/2016
Pathetic and Cliche.
Yologamer chapter 5 . 10/19/2016
I am so happy that you update this story and thank you love the chapter
Guest chapter 3 . 7/29/2015
You story has a good plot to it and everything but your grammar and spelling remind me of a 5th grader you really need someone to beta for you cause this story just makes me cringe
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