Reviews for with bated breath (2008) |
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![]() ![]() I would you take some down? I actually wanted to read the old version |
![]() ![]() Love that you’re back |
![]() ![]() ![]() can’t remember much other than i liked this this story, but i’m glad it’s being worked on again ️ hope to see more soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() Glad to see your back. What happen to all the chapters? |
![]() ![]() ![]() glad to see you're back to this story, can't wait to read it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ummmm okay? |
![]() ![]() ![]() (Tilts side to side) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hi there, I just wanted to pop in really fast and say that I adore the partial translation that you have in your story right now. And I certainly hope that the other reviews echo that your story is super awesome, because it is. It makes me want to write the same thing - and you know that wouldn't be fair. But hey, that's why we say imitation is the sincerest form of flattery! Anyway, I wanted to leave that brief note because you put all the work into writing your story and I arguably put zero work into reading it. Thank you for doing that work! I hope that words spring to the page for you for this project and your other ones. And just know that I found this very fun to read, and I thought that the narration was extremely enjoyable. Thanks again! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I know this hasn't been updated for awhile but if you ever thought of continuing it, I'd be happy to read more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh, the words are backward. |
![]() ![]() ![]() The premise of this story is so interesting! I look forward to future chapters, keep up the good work! |
![]() ![]() Not bad. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm enjoying this story so far. As for the question about being able to read the backwards words? As a dyslexic, I can read them just as easily as I can read normal looking words! It's nice reading a realistic story in the OC category. It helps that your character seems to not know what world she's in. It's refreshing and I love it! |
![]() ![]() is this story also abandoned ...it been two years since the last update if it is than it would suck considering the build up ...if the author take some of his/her oh so precious time and read's this the reply by posting an update |
![]() ![]() ![]() Heard this quote a million times, not as cool as it was the first time. |