|Reviews for with bated breath (2008)|
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/3/2020
I would you take some down? I actually wanted to read the old version
| Guest chapter 2 . 7/18/2020
Love that you’re back
| Xipilzuma chapter 1 . 7/7/2020
can’t remember much other than i liked this this story, but i’m glad it’s being worked on again ️ hope to see more soon
| Tim Ngu chapter 1 . 7/7/2020
Glad to see your back. What happen to all the chapters?
| homelybiscuit chapter 1 . 7/6/2020
glad to see you're back to this story, can't wait to read it!
| InARealPickle chapter 1 . 7/6/2020
| Ekun-Asha chapter 1 . 7/6/2020
(Tilts side to side)
| Silimaira chapter 17 . 6/28/2020
Hi there, I just wanted to pop in really fast and say that I adore the partial translation that you have in your story right now. And I certainly hope that the other reviews echo that your story is super awesome, because it is. It makes me want to write the same thing - and you know that wouldn't be fair. But hey, that's why we say imitation is the sincerest form of flattery!
Anyway, I wanted to leave that brief note because you put all the work into writing your story and I arguably put zero work into reading it. Thank you for doing that work! I hope that words spring to the page for you for this project and your other ones. And just know that I found this very fun to read, and I thought that the narration was extremely enjoyable. Thanks again!
| homelybiscuit chapter 17 . 2/28/2019
I know this hasn't been updated for awhile but if you ever thought of continuing it, I'd be happy to read more!
| Tallow and Port chapter 4 . 2/3/2019
oh, the words are backward.
| Lynkoln chapter 17 . 12/24/2018
The premise of this story is so interesting! I look forward to future chapters, keep up the good work!
| FanGirl chapter 17 . 6/27/2018
| SeiferBoy chapter 7 . 5/22/2018
I'm enjoying this story so far. As for the question about being able to read the backwards words? As a dyslexic, I can read them just as easily as I can read normal looking words! It's nice reading a realistic story in the OC category. It helps that your character seems to not know what world she's in. It's refreshing and I love it!
| Guest chapter 17 . 5/12/2018
is this story also abandoned ...it been two years since the last update if it is than it would suck considering the build up ...if the author take some of his/her oh so precious time and read's this the reply by posting an update
| Melissa Fairy chapter 1 . 4/16/2018
Heard this quote a million times, not as cool as it was the first time.