|Reviews for Chains|
| Sylvan Moon chapter 1 . 2/23/2016
* is fanning myself *
You truly have a gift for keeping Haji in character even when he's taking control. I just wish I knew what Saya was thinking all this time. Or maybe she can't think AT ALL...
| PassingStranger chapter 1 . 12/2/2015
Ahem... So... I recognize that you wrote this several years before I read it. I recently finished the blood plus anime... And finding that I wanted more, I began searching the vast seas of the interweb. For the first time, I searched for material with the marvelous zest of lemon. I have read a number of you works... *Blushes*... They are fantastically-written and are actually really beautiful in addition to being dripping with eroticism when you wish for them to be. You, friend, are a very talented writer.
Also... I don't like to think of myself as a pervert... But... OH MY FRICK! *nose gushes blood*
| JLouise chapter 1 . 6/8/2015
I was literally in tears by the end of this story!
| Penumba VIII chapter 1 . 10/2/2012
I never imagined the path your words would take until my eyes passed over them, I absolutely applaud the way you wrote this magnificent piece, you kept me at the edge of my seat and wit with it. The way you portrayed both characters was true to their original forms, with the unexpected twists of their psyche thrown in. The insight of Haji's mind and Saya's... Want? Unraveling? (I'm at a loss of words on that XD) was truly masterful.
| Esther Clemmens chapter 1 . 5/19/2012
Wow! You have really captured Haji in this one! He really can't stop being the faithful chevalier, no matter what Saya does to him!
| Ladii Emelia chapter 1 . 11/29/2011
| Violetcarson chapter 1 . 9/1/2011
That was ridiculously...hot? Amazing? Glorious in every way? I have no words. You obviously have them all. Hot damn!
| AJLYAMBER96 chapter 1 . 8/29/2011
ummm wow. i actually didnt know how this wood play out. i wuna see them do this again, but she is his servent all day. doesnt have to be sex, though i wudnt mind that... but like other things.
| Sakura Namida chapter 1 . 8/18/2011
This is the best piece of writing I have ever read in my entire life. No joke. I loved everything about it. Your analysis of character was spot on, your technique was better than many published authors, your style was thoughtful but entertaining and well-paced. Your research on the books mentioned was perfect ethos to make the story more realistic. I think what I loved most of all, though, is how well you got inside Haji's mind. It's such a pervading factor of his life to be subserviant to Saya, and I don't think before I read this story I considered how much of an impact that would have on his life. I think I always assumed that, because I am myself always aware of what I want, Haji would also know what he wants and would act upon it as humans are so wont to do. Regardless, I'm beginning to babble, and I don't want to bore you. I just wanted you to know how absolute breath-taking I think your story is, and how much respect I have for you as a writer. Truly the best work I've ever seen.
| Zara Allegra Vespertine chapter 1 . 5/30/2011
as usual, you did it again! man! can't wait for your other upcoming posts.
your play of words are really something. I have not recovered yet from reading your other works.
now where are my smelling salts? *swoons again*
| VP4444 chapter 1 . 4/27/2011
that was a truelly great story. glad to have read it. bye!
| Phlogistics chapter 1 . 1/20/2011
This was absolutely fantastic! Thank you so much for writing this fic.
| Layla Hamilton chapter 1 . 8/26/2010
Oh, nevermind that warning, if I were in Saya's shoes I'd play Russian roulette with Haji any time (except the fact that being in her place involves all the killing and inner torment).
Nice job writing the story from that perpective, the scene was set extremely well and you showed the reader a rich vocabulary (really liked that, I even had to search some things to be "suspicion-free").
| chieriru-chan chapter 1 . 6/29/2010
that sounds sooooooooooooo like what would haji would do! i luvd it!
| SnowLion no Miko chapter 1 . 6/5/2010
Wow this was great. It was very nicely written. Great work!