Reviews for Wild World
Mr. Soze chapter 5 . 5/17/2009
S1R chapter 5 . 5/12/2009
love it. the fact that the story is progressing gradually draws me in. But hurry the fuck up and give naruto some knowledge on the rinnegan.
S1R chapter 2 . 5/12/2009
Gryffindors chapter 5 . 5/12/2009
that's the most believable rinnengan naruto story i've ever read
r2d2cool chapter 5 . 5/11/2009
...rofl...the end.
r2d2cool chapter 2 . 5/10/2009
he has the rin'negan. Dude i have an idea. Make naruto make zabuza his puppet! keep the sword. Have him use Haku too.
Loatroll chapter 5 . 5/10/2009
Argh dude! :D The chapters (I just started reading an hour or two ago) ended just when things were getting even more interesting!

Great work! I love the story so far, and you've really managed to salvage graduation-cannon-Naruto from being.. an idiot to someone one can actually like and respect, it's also a lot easier empathize with this Naruto because he doesn't just take it.

Good point there on judges.

Really great work! Really looking forward to more :-)
kyuubi shadow chapter 5 . 5/9/2009
Very good
wellheupdated chapter 5 . 5/7/2009
nice to know your still alive...
Rago Dragovian chapter 5 . 5/6/2009
Lol. Great story. So, which will you update this or Houses? I hope you don't abandon either of them.
PMON chapter 1 . 5/5/2009
I read all your stories and you are the first new author whose work has interested me in quite some time, so it was great to get to read some new material instead of waiting for updates. I like the pacing of your stories, and even though it takes time to see events that I am excited for, it would spoil your stories for the action to proceed faster. Good job all around.
mfmxxx chapter 5 . 5/5/2009
Have Naruto join the Akatsuki? :P

Fritter chapter 5 . 5/2/2009
I've been running into a strange number of fics today that involve Naruto with the Rinnegan. I absolutely love what you are doing with this story! Everything from Naruto not trusting anybody enough to show them his eyes to his growing resentment towards the village has been skillfully woven together. It is especially interesting that, bloodline or no, this is exactly the type of interaction he may have had with Sasuke in the manga if he had shown anything remotely like the type of progress he has attained in this fic.

In any case, I would like throw in the obligitory "Update Soon" and hope that you continue this story at the quality that you have kept thus far.
viel12 chapter 5 . 5/1/2009
very interesting story you have here. hope to more of it soon.
uo-chou chapter 5 . 4/30/2009
Excellent chapter. Please keep up the great work. I hope Naruto does something completely unexpected. :)
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