Reviews for In Bed Part I : Itachi & Sasuke
Marsy1999 chapter 1 . 7/1/2015
Wow , The Most Werdiest Story I Have Ever Read
Crona My Friend chapter 1 . 5/26/2014
pollyh12 chapter 1 . 3/30/2014
I liked it but I really did not get it. but nice story anyway.
StarCrysis chapter 1 . 9/14/2013
Uhh, I don't know if that was intentionally poor or what? It was definitely hard to follow, and was very rushed. There was little detail, and the ending made little sense. I hope you still write though, it wasn't horrible and I see potential.
leo chapter 1 . 8/9/2013
anna chapter 1 . 11/23/2012
nice, very nice.;)
The Silverclaimer chapter 1 . 2/15/2012

...what's up with Naruto and Sasuke then? Are they going out?

..and was Sasuke really unconscious...?
Starcloudy94 chapter 1 . 12/26/2010
like this it was good but there could have been more
SlackJawedSmurf chapter 1 . 11/18/2008

So I'm going to be honest- it wasn't great. Some of it was kinda hard to follow. On the other hand, I really can't talk- I'm awful at writing.

So, yeah. It wasn't brilliant. But the ending made me laugh, and with a beta, it could improve a lot.

I really hope that the comment by Club-of-UchihaElite doesn't put you off writing. I mean, they havnt even posted any of their own work. Not saying they can't write- I havn't seen their stuff, I wouldn't know- but by putting up your work you're a lot braver.

Good luck

UchihaLeDisko chapter 1 . 11/18/2008
THAT WAS SO BAD! like that was horrible.

it was SORT OF funny when sasuke said he raped himself

but the rest was just BLECH!

yeesh wut were u thinking?