Reviews for In Bed Part I : Itachi & Sasuke
Crona My Friend chapter 1 . 5/26/2014
pollyh12 chapter 1 . 3/30/2014
I liked it but I really did not get it. but nice story anyway.
StarCrysis chapter 1 . 9/14/2013
Uhh, I don't know if that was intentionally poor or what? It was definitely hard to follow, and was very rushed. There was little detail, and the ending made little sense. I hope you still write though, it wasn't horrible and I see potential.
leo chapter 1 . 8/9/2013
anna chapter 1 . 11/23/2012
nice, very nice.;)
The Silverclaimer chapter 1 . 2/15/2012

...what's up with Naruto and Sasuke then? Are they going out?

..and was Sasuke really unconscious...?
gaara'sGurl101 chapter 1 . 12/26/2010
like this it was good but there could have been more
Hard and Horny Nude InuYasha chapter 1 . 3/10/2009
lt was definetly interesting.l don't think it was nearly as bad as the other reviews is rtue it couls use some work but over all it was good.

Nude InuYasha
SlackJawedSmurf chapter 1 . 11/18/2008

So I'm going to be honest- it wasn't great. Some of it was kinda hard to follow. On the other hand, I really can't talk- I'm awful at writing.

So, yeah. It wasn't brilliant. But the ending made me laugh, and with a beta, it could improve a lot.

I really hope that the comment by Club-of-UchihaElite doesn't put you off writing. I mean, they havnt even posted any of their own work. Not saying they can't write- I havn't seen their stuff, I wouldn't know- but by putting up your work you're a lot braver.

Good luck

UchihaLeDisko chapter 1 . 11/18/2008
THAT WAS SO BAD! like that was horrible.

it was SORT OF funny when sasuke said he raped himself

but the rest was just BLECH!

yeesh wut were u thinking?