|Reviews for In Bed Part I : Itachi & Sasuke|
| StarCrysis chapter 1 . 9/14/2013
Uhh, I don't know if that was intentionally poor or what? It was definitely hard to follow, and was very rushed. There was little detail, and the ending made little sense. I hope you still write though, it wasn't horrible and I see potential.
| leo chapter 1 . 8/9/2013
| anna chapter 1 . 11/23/2012
nice, very nice.;)
| The Silverclaimer chapter 1 . 2/15/2012
...what's up with Naruto and Sasuke then? Are they going out?
..and was Sasuke really unconscious...?
| gaara'sGurl101 chapter 1 . 12/26/2010
like this it was good but there could have been more
| Hard and Horny Nude InuYasha chapter 1 . 3/10/2009
lt was definetly interesting.l don't think it was nearly as bad as the other reviews is rtue it couls use some work but over all it was good.
| SlackJawedSmurf chapter 1 . 11/18/2008
So I'm going to be honest- it wasn't great. Some of it was kinda hard to follow. On the other hand, I really can't talk- I'm awful at writing.
So, yeah. It wasn't brilliant. But the ending made me laugh, and with a beta, it could improve a lot.
I really hope that the comment by Club-of-UchihaElite doesn't put you off writing. I mean, they havnt even posted any of their own work. Not saying they can't write- I havn't seen their stuff, I wouldn't know- but by putting up your work you're a lot braver.
| UchihaLeDisko chapter 1 . 11/18/2008
THAT WAS SO BAD! like that was horrible.
it was SORT OF funny when sasuke said he raped himself
but the rest was just BLECH!
yeesh wut were u thinking?