Reviews for Misadventure
Tina101 chapter 4 . 12/8/2008
That's it? ( I was really worried about Jasper for a second, but I'm glad that everything worked out.

Realynn8 chapter 4 . 12/8/2008
Great work! :) Go Jasper! And Alice.
Snowysong chapter 4 . 12/7/2008
Liked it.
icearoundthemoon chapter 4 . 12/7/2008
Aw! That was a great ending! It was so sweet! :)

You should write more stories. Your great at it! :D

Nice job! It was great!
bat-with-butterfly-wings chapter 4 . 12/7/2008
OMG that was FANTASTIC! Wonderful story, absolutely wonderful!
la saboteuse chapter 4 . 12/7/2008

That was amazing!

I liked the way you decided to have it come about. It was very good.

Maria is finally dead!


Oh, and...Jasper doesn't really need Carlisle to fix him up. Carlisle is a human doctor, and vampires heal naturally.
Tina101 chapter 3 . 12/4/2008
Nice chapter, very balanced between Maria and Jasper and fighting.

la saboteuse chapter 3 . 12/4/2008

I think Alice (or somebody) should come to the rescue!

Elsewise, mayhap it would actually be better for him to defeat Maria on his own. He kind of needs to in order to truly conquer his past.

Then again,If Alice came and helped, it would be symbolic of their unity and how Jasper doesn't have to do things on his own anymore.

I dunno, whatevs.

update ASAP, s'il vous plait!
la saboteuse chapter 2 . 12/4/2008
Ah! !

Quite a predicament we've got here.

This should prove interesting.

ice around the moon chapter 3 . 12/4/2008
Hey, great chapter! :D

I really like the fight scene! It had a lot of details, and details are Great! :)

You keep it up!

I don't really know what to sugest on, I mean all of it's fantastic! I'll just say, THIS STORY ROCKS! B)
justanotherditzyredhead chapter 2 . 11/29/2008
NO! I hate Maria, I really hope she dies. Poor Alice and Jasper.
Lee21323 chapter 2 . 11/29/2008
Very cute and intriging start... I love me some Jasper and Alice goodness... would like more now please...
cakes chapter 2 . 11/29/2008
ahh dreadfull my heart stopped pumping! i wnat to know ow it ends!
Tina101 chapter 2 . 11/29/2008
Oh no! Please update!

ice around the moon chapter 2 . 11/28/2008
Oh, I love it! Mostly the, "Nice eyes Whitlock." Part. I love it! I love it! I love it! Great job! :)
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