|Reviews for Forgotten|
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/3/2013
hi please make another chapter i love it
| gotmilk113 chapter 1 . 12/13/2009
UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE! PLEASE! Awesome tory! ;)
| moonlightcreature chapter 1 . 3/18/2009
well it's kind of early to say ..but i'm liking it)good job
| wolf's paradise chapter 1 . 12/11/2008
This was pretty good so far. It lacked a little bit in detail, however. I understand you were probably pretty tired, but don't let that infringe on your work! I know that most people know what Naruto looks like, but when she saw him again, what did he look like? What did the others look like? They're in high school, so are they wearing jeans and t-shirts? What about his thinking face makes him cute? Still, it was good for a first chapter. I look forward to seeing more!
- wolf's paradise
| DrendeSalkash chapter 1 . 11/21/2008
nice chapter. kinda reminds me a bit of Rune Soldier. Louie an Narut do act a lot a like, lol
| SK9 chapter 1 . 11/18/2008
Why did you leave us with a cliffy? WHY? *Starts crying hysterically* Please update soon! :)
| Naru-chan345 chapter 1 . 11/17/2008
This seems pretty interesting so far! I like it! Please update soon!