Your beta sucks. There are several mistakes in every chapter so far.

cant express enough how much i loved your characterizations in this amazing story..! willbe a repeater for truely epic enemies to steamy snarky lovers.. thank you so much

love it soo much

im dying at this disney chapter.. slay me oh great authoress

What a great ride. Got here since someone posted on the sshg reddit that they were looking for this story. I was skeptical based on the premise, but thoroughly enjoyed this!

I’ve read an embarrassing number of snamione stories . And yet, this is my favorite EVER.

This is one of my favorite Snape/Hermione stories EVER. If I could have a "TopTen List" of Snape stories from all fan fiction, this would definitely be on it. For this chapter, I love the throwaway joke (every HP series reader is familiar with the "Snape's greasy hair" trope) in this chapter. "He had no idea why anyone would want to call a hair product GOOD HAIR DAY, it would seem to suggest there was something such as a BAD HAIR DAY..."! Love it, love your characterizations, love this story.

I love “mugglishly” as an adverb

Wait a minute! Is this infidelity clause one sided?! I don't see why the enforcement of it is what pisses off Hermione and not it being one-sided. unless it's for both spouses. Before that the story was hilarious.

This chapter is so funny, loved it.

Wow this was epic. Absolutely stunning piece of work.

Not sure if you will get this review since you posted this story so long ago, but I just wanted to let you know that I really enjoyed it! Loved the wit, plot and romance!

what i dont understand so far is why no one in wizarding world knowing about his secret with dumbledore? and where is harry? is he dead?

Wonderful story! 3

This fic is super old, so this comment will never be read. I would have killed to have beta read this when it was written. Grammatical errors are rife, Hermione literally screams most of what she says, and the dialogue is very Muggle *and* American. I’ve never once heard a Brit say “bull crap,” much less a pureblood witch. The story idea is great, the execution quite rough, sadly. I don’t know if I can take 62 chapters of Ginny Weasley sounding like an American teenager from the 1980s.