Reviews for Cake
SydneyAlice chapter 1 . 4/11/2009
That was fabulous!
bbabe007 chapter 1 . 3/17/2009
Wow. I've read countless stories in the Twilight fandom and yours is the first I've reviewed. I just wanted to say that I thought your writing was very in-character and that it was also very, very well written. Your use of adjectives and grammar was superb and I fully enjoyed reading your version of Edward and Bella (especially since they didn't seem to deviate too much from Stephenie Meyer's version). Great work!
toastqueen chapter 1 . 3/5/2009
ooh! very hot, very nice!

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thenextGayleKing chapter 1 . 3/4/2009
Hot dawg! Damn it that was HOT HOT HOT! As Oliver Twist would say "Can I have some more, please?". I'm enjoying your other story, 'Comeuppance', immensely too. I will get to all your others but if they are this good, then I will have to savour them one at a time. Keep up the good work. You rock!
Dulcinea21bella chapter 1 . 2/25/2009
I LOVE this story. I just read Windows over on Twilighted and remembered reading Cake a while back. I love how you write E & B. I hope you continue to write these- they are so very erotic...
gasolinerain chapter 1 . 2/18/2009
wowza. I think I need one more of your delicious stories before bed!
12345jj chapter 1 . 1/28/2009
WOW! it would be great if you could right more chapters from the familys reaction during and after. x
Lindsay1 chapter 1 . 1/5/2009
omg that was so hot! *favorited*
Moxi chapter 1 . 12/19/2008
Very sexy and well done. You drew it out nicely starting with the whole cake thing. I really liked this one. :)
Gethernia chapter 1 . 12/16/2008
wow, I love it
vibhandaka chapter 1 . 11/30/2008
That was awesome! Well done.
RomperStomper chapter 1 . 11/27/2008
By golly that was incredible!
animefan28 chapter 1 . 11/22/2008
Great story! I loved it. I'm glad the rest of the Cullens gave them privacy in the end. Though i'm sure it wouldn't bother them since Im sure they always know when one of the couples in the house are going at it. lol More for Bella's sake I'd think. But anyways nice job, I'm adding it to my favs!
Mariea1 chapter 1 . 11/19/2008
That was so yummy!
kim-macafee chapter 1 . 11/19/2008
This is a GREAT story! Very realistic of Edward-KIND of...
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