|Reviews for Love Affair|
| jk chapter 3 . 1/27
ewwww hes only 17 and hes that huge of a skank? and this is the piece of shit you want for virgin bella?
the whole, you make me want too be a better man bullshit doesn't change the fact that hes a used up whore
| WiseOldSoul chapter 25 . 12/5/2015
i saw the date of your last update and realized this will never be finished.
what a shame. you left off at the crucial moment...why start to write a story
which interests many then stop? i hate that about fanfics...wish there was a rule in place about finishing the story...
anyways, i suppose e/b hopefully will marry and be HEA however, i was also waiting
for emily to pop in somewhere (at the wedding, perhaps?) either pregnant or with a baby...
i imagine she may even die leaving the baby for bella and edward to raise, just like
edward's past... i hate to say it, but emily was an idiot, sorry but a whore and an idiot...of course, she could start a big scandal and create a big problem for edward and try to steal him away from bella, and edward will feel guilty about the baby since he/she would be in similar situation as he was...
i guess i will just have to use my imagination.
| WiseOldSoul chapter 18 . 12/5/2015
i am sorry but edward made his bed a long time ago.
women didnt have any power those days, let alone a maid which
bella was. if he loved her so, he should have made it clear to bella and
objected clearly before or at the wedding...instead, months later, after
he fooled around with emily, who is probably pregnant with her behavior
at their last meeting, what is he expecting? bella could have probably
had somewhat a if not happy, a satisfied life with jacob...instead with
his continued pursuit of her this late how is all of this going to unfold?
esp when divorce is unheard of... sorry but he was a coward when he
should have spoken up and now should back out graciously for all concerned...
but this is E/B story so we demand a HEA ;) ...
how will you achieve this? hope you finish this story... :)
| Sweetheart102 chapter 25 . 2/10/2014
| thepinktabby chapter 25 . 12/6/2011
You've said this was a repost, and so thus i beseech you... Moar Please.
| LPsDarkAngel chapter 25 . 3/26/2011
Oh i do hope you update this soon, it's a wonderful story.
| Lady Dragona chapter 6 . 3/17/2011
Bella has met Jacob in London and Edward now has to leave to go to London to see his dying father. This is where things start to get tricky if I remember.
| Lady Dragona chapter 5 . 3/17/2011
I love the small changes in Edward.
| Lady Dragona chapter 4 . 3/17/2011
I love the banter between Edward and Bella.
| Lady Dragona chapter 3 . 3/17/2011
I love how no one will tell Edward where BElla lives. I also enjoyed that William made sure that Bella made it home safely.
| Lady Dragona chapter 2 . 3/17/2011
I love this strong BElla. I love that she is willing to be true to herself and stand up to Edward even if he is the Duke's brother.
| Lady Dragona chapter 1 . 3/17/2011
I plan to enjoy this a second time. The story is one of my very favorites. It is a very interesting way to be introduced and insulted all at once.
| flower123 chapter 25 . 12/27/2010
their getting married :) update soon
| paggle14 chapter 25 . 12/27/2010
OMG 3 it
| flower123 chapter 18 . 12/25/2010
and now we get to the little bit of romeo and Juliet lol update soon