Reviews for 016: Flitter
caspianandsusan4ever chapter 1 . 7/8/2012
i favorited this story quite a while ago and forgot just how much i loved it until now. You had my heart aching right along with theirs and this is a beautiful piece of work. thank you for sharing it with all of us to read!
LM22102 chapter 1 . 12/13/2011
Music: RED's Already Over Part 2 RainyMood (background rain) Absolute heartache.

If only Aslan's words here rang true, then there would have been hope for Susan. The butterfly analogy is truly well done, thank you.
mae-E chapter 1 . 11/21/2008
this was a well writen little story.

I like how you have him saying to her with such certaincy that she will not leave. my guess that it was to give her back a little of the hope and stregnth that she needed.

good work.
brookemopolitan chapter 1 . 11/18/2008
this is very sweet! is it staying a one shot or does it have more coming?
Autumnia chapter 1 . 11/18/2008
I liked this. I love the interaction and the conversations between Caspian and Susan. There was a hint of the romance but it was subtle and made the story a bit more believable to me.
nat chapter 1 . 11/18/2008
that was sad .. made me wanna cry .. if only something like that happened in the book and in the movie ..

but it left me hanging .. lol .. i still loved it though ..

xoxo