Reviews for Through My Eyes
isabelbecket chapter 1 . 11/20/2008
second chapter please. you'll go far hon.

lol jk
Her Name Is Erika chapter 1 . 11/18/2008
Aw, this story was cute.

Believe it or not, I still have love for DL, and this made the quiet DL lover in me bounce around even if it was for a few minutes.

I lost my DL voice, so thank you for helping me find it.

Nice concept. I thought it was nice - a reunion.

Even though this has been done, you gave it your own twist, and I appreciate that.

The only constructive criticism I can give you is just work on Logan and Dana's characterization a smidge. Even thouugh they're matured, I would have loved to see Logan behave like an ass a little, and Dana be her 'I'm-going-to-kill-you-with-my-glare-and-knee-you-in-the-nuts' self, even though they liked each other, and all of that mess happened at senior prom.

So, that's all I can say about this oneshot.

Keep writing, Breanna (I hope you don't mind that).

You def. have untapped potential )

-Erika
schillingklaus chapter 1 . 11/18/2008
Dana-Logan supercute. It cries for a sequel.
rkohulkster chapter 1 . 11/18/2008
This was really cute. Loved it. Please make a sequel.
kazma.kay chapter 1 . 11/18/2008
OMG! i LOVED it! You have to write a sequel! I was amazing :D