|Reviews for Through My Eyes|
| isabelbecket chapter 1 . 11/20/2008
second chapter please. you'll go far hon.
| her name is erika chapter 1 . 11/18/2008
Aw, this story was cute.
Believe it or not, I still have love for DL, and this made the quiet DL lover in me bounce around even if it was for a few minutes.
I lost my DL voice, so thank you for helping me find it.
Nice concept. I thought it was nice - a reunion.
Even though this has been done, you gave it your own twist, and I appreciate that.
The only constructive criticism I can give you is just work on Logan and Dana's characterization a smidge. Even thouugh they're matured, I would have loved to see Logan behave like an ass a little, and Dana be her 'I'm-going-to-kill-you-with-my-glare-and-knee-you-in-the-nuts' self, even though they liked each other, and all of that mess happened at senior prom.
So, that's all I can say about this oneshot.
Keep writing, Breanna (I hope you don't mind that).
You def. have untapped potential )
| schillingklaus chapter 1 . 11/18/2008
Dana-Logan supercute. It cries for a sequel.
| rkohulkster chapter 1 . 11/18/2008
This was really cute. Loved it. Please make a sequel.
| kazma.kay chapter 1 . 11/18/2008
OMG! i LOVED it! You have to write a sequel! I was amazing :D