The mysterious man is author-sama of course :)

This is a good story but man the lines of 'x' are enough to put me off reading it again. I understand why you've put them in but it's completely unprofessional. Yes I know you aren't a professional writer but that's no excuse for driving your reader insane with 'x' line breaks to switch scenes. Use your words to switch scenes and locations. That's what it means to be a writer. If you disagree with me, I dare you to go to any library or book seller and find me a book that uses line breaks to change scenes, locations or character interactions. You won't find one because as I said it's unprofessional. Only places like fanfic allow an author to publish a work with line breaks. So my constructive criticism for you is to work on deleting that crutch. Your story is good. Very good actually. But it'd be much better without those annoying line breaks.

OMG. I can't read this carp anymore. You are so bad.

So, the whole premise of Naruto on this team was Kakashi could teach him ninjutsu. See the hole yet?
How many jutsu has he been taught? Oh, yea. A whole whopping fat zero. If you are going to use a plot point, don't make it a big ass hole for your readers to fall into (not that we would because we can all see it but you apparently can't).

I swear to god I have read this scene in every damn Naruto fic ever written.

shes a tool for scumbag like naruto s sensi a traiter to him and family

kasaki wouldnt back chat naruto s mother ah she straight him out

I'm thinking that someone from kingdom hearts it's in Naruto's world trying to alter the story...(only the organisation xiii used coats)

Entertaining story, apart from too many unnecessary kiddie romances...

You made naruto "smart" but he still got tricked by MIZUKI OF ALL PEOPLE? especially after he knew what he did to him without even a hint of suspicion? Dayum

No excitement useless fic

Useless naruto anko is a jonin hahaha useless author saying control emotion what about anko useless author just die

Bro, Neji doesn't have a reason to hate Hinata anymore, she was stripped off the family and even has the real like him, heck Hinata isn't a Hyuuga anymore.

Great chapter, I love how you make the brothers have their moment

Of course it won't work, this Naruto isn't seeking regnonition like the original and doesn't give a fuck if Sasuke is stronger than him or not because he has made up his mind about his own path already.