This great! One of th best stories I'ver ever read, please update soon.

Great story. This is probably one of the best story I've read in a long while. Having Naruto use a Bo staff is very creative and interesting. Your spelling and grammer are top notch. I hope you update this soon.

Very very interesting!

Continue, please!

great start to this story. you did a really good job with your descriptions. i'll be back to read more.

Till next time

Gina

Think i'll keep an eye on this

Nice to see new faces and new ways of writing

such is the power of youth

Pretty good 1st chapter. I could really that place in my mind.

This looks pretty good so far; just one thing I noticed might be wrong. In Japan, white is actually the color of death, so I don't think he'd have been mistaken as an angel; more likely he would have been considered a shinigami. It doesn't really matter, just something I thought I'd point out.

I wonder what's going to happen to Naruto's old friends? Will they ever make a reappearance? What kind of reaction did the Sasuke retrieval squad have? Will they go find him? I can't wait to find out!

:D:

Oh i hope you will have a new chapter out soon Sarakiel-san, as i am now hooked on it and expect great from this from now on, Anyway the story is really intresting so far but i do wonder if we will see and Toad summons soon.. cuz if he uses them Jiraiya-sama would soon know where he is :P *enjoys Jiraiya-sama's Pervy-ness and books* ; Anyway as i said i expect only great things from this so you better not dissapoint me by going all gay on me :P heh anyway take care and hope to see more chapters and maybe stories from you

Greets,

Shadow