This is the first fic where Sakura actually forgives him. I'm so glad because they always did her dirty and unnecessarily hostile. They kept forgetting that she cares for Naruto and she showed it in Chunnin exams as well. Writers smh

Second time rereading and I still cried at this chapter again. Man you know how to make people cry right.

man I REALLY wish you hadn't quit writing as this story is amazing no matter how many times I've read it I still love it lol

while I love the concept of the story you made a minor mistake. You see you said Jiraiya didn't meet up with Naruto and that was because Naruto stayed away from villages (obviously meaning away from the "spy network") but there's the fact that Jiraiya could've easily asked a toad to reverse summon Naruto or just to appear by Naruto and tell Jiraiya where he is so he could catch up

“Lee didn't have that option but he had been taught another by Gai Sensei. He raised his foot directly over his head and brought it down with all his might. An explosion of earth and he had made a hole big enough for himself to get into. He dove in and punched the side of the hole, caving it in and holding his breath.”

That’s really cool and I love all the little details you put in like that

update?

Apparently, Hiraishin is just Apparition but with both more limits and potential.

Honestly it is ok but too many errors. Lore was ripped apart in so many ways it was not funny. To top off the error filled mess the writer adds in a lot of other things that just kill them story. Good luck but I will not try to read this mess of a story again.

Great job. Hope you provide more chapters to the story

Accidenti che casino!

Ah ottimo!

Please update or make a sequel your story is so good it would be a shame to not see a conclusion

update please this is goooooooooood

Please more!

update