Reviews for Naruto: Tenshikage |
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![]() ![]() ![]() this work of art had me glued to it till this chapter. I do hope you will eventually be able to finish it even if the time between chapters is long. Thank you and keep it going. |
![]() ![]() ![]() interesting story tho cant say agree to the not killing then killing then back to not killing lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey I have to say I’m loving this story! I’ve read it like 3 times now and can’t wait for more! I know you said it’s not a romance story but I can’t help but want Hinata to get together with Naruto! :) |
![]() ![]() Naruto should have used Giant Temari sexy no jitsu and blame the whole thing on the toad sage if Temari ever found out. |
![]() ![]() ![]() very good |
![]() ![]() Loved the Indiana Jones reference to the traps! |
![]() ![]() Not what I was expecting a little disappointed |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lame |
![]() ![]() ![]() I gruels hope you post a new chapter soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() The ending was so freaking hilarious that I was laughing for a few minutes lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() ...Tazuna? What you doing waaay outside the land of waves? |
![]() ![]() this good keep witing |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sensei was misspelled you spelt it where's the EI flipped around |
![]() ![]() ![]() you have WITH AND KUNAI MISSPELLED |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hi there Sarakiel! I am a fan of your Nauto: Tenshikage fanfic. I love the way you made the twists in the story. Iam excited to see the next chapters of your work. In regard to that, I would like to suggest, since Tengoku is the village hidden in the sky, that you include some elements of the story from the movie: Naruto Shippuden The Movie: Bonds. In particular are some survivor ninja from the destroyed Land of the Sky. They are very much adept to technology and can be a cmplement or partner to Tengoku's resident inventor in order to build more amazing things, I suggest particularly flying fortresses since the people from the Land of the Sky lived on a floating fortress-city named 'Ancor Vantian'. Thanks and I lood forward to seeing more of your exciting stories. Keep up the good work Sarakiel! |